Touched by Darkness

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touched by DARKNESS
 
 
There are two dimensions to this world. And asides from one main difference, the rest of the worlds are almost identical. 
 
In one of the dimensions, there are people called the Herzlos who are said to have been "touched by darkness", turning them into creatures hungering for human flesh at night. However, this effect only shows up once the sun sets, so nobody can tell if the people around them are dangerous or not throughout the day. This only makes everyone suspicious of each other and throws the world into chaos. 
 
The main reason humans have not yet gone extinct is because of an organization called the Praelia, which train individuals who wish to fight against the Herzlos. While anybody can join, only the best survive. 
 
Though many joined their ranks in the beginning, they soon realized that it was not all glory after the majority of the new recruits were killed within the first three years. Their ranks constantly diminish in size while the ones who are "touched" continue to grow. 
 
But the people were suddenly given new hope when an oracle predicted that people not from "this world" will arrive and chase away the darkness.
 
It has been almost three hundred years since then, and the Praelia are barely hanging on.
 
When will the light finally arrive?
 
And with the Herzlos suddenly seeming to gain intelligence, will the light be enough?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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xxFiction
#1
Chapter 6: Congrats to Ahri! She seems like a very strict and serious character. xD Can't wait to see more of her and the other characters. Thanks for updating! Can't wait to read the first chapter. :D
aniyababo
#2
Chapter 6: congratulations to Ahri! oh wow, thanks to her, we can all see a different side to xue and it's really refreshing!
also, it's weird to know that the herloz are getting, smarter. it's bad for everyone really, but it adds to the story, which is good!
oh and i see jinruk! haha cute cameo for this chapter, and the fact that nobody really noticed his presence! lol
btw, i was just wondering. now that the teasers are done and the story's officially about to start, will you be making some kind of character map/description thing for all the chosen and side characters in the story?? that'd be really helpful, but you know, i was just wondering.
darlingdeerling
#3
Chapter 6: AHHHH!! Yay!! It's so exciting to see a character you created come to life. Thank you for picking Ahri >w< I hope she contributes a lot to the story.
"I heard they let another Praelia die." When I read that, I got shivers. That's so cold... i love it ouo
But seriously. The Herzlos are becoming more of a problem and I've never been more excited for the next update. I can't wait to see what you will write now that all the applicants have been chosen!! <3
rojeulite
#4
Chapter 6: /GASP. YOU UPDATED, YAAAAS.
eheh, congrats to darlingdeerling!
d'aww, norae worries so much. she must know a lot of what's going on especially when she runs errands in the headquarters. BUT HARA- I STILL CAN'T WITH HER BEING SO MOTHERLY. imma squish her.
i get this vibe that ahri's the one leader figure and will be that way for the rest of the story. OOOOohhhh, and she's good friends with Xue! These two would kick together.
i have a feeling i'm going to love jinruk more as the story goes on. eavesdropping while having a book up his face, how classic. xD
so we're finished with introducing the chosen applicants, YAAAY. I'm so happy to know the story will get going now. :3 ehuehue
xxFiction
#5
Chapter 6: Congrats to Cha Jinruk! :) He seems like a troublesome one. xD Can't wait to see the next chosen applicant!
iisMoMo #6
Chapter 6: CONGRATS CHA JINRUK!
I'm back from my break it was shorter then i thought
lots of family issues going on
aniyababo
#7
Chapter 6: this chapter is so cute! hahaha thank you for choosing Jinruk! at least now, Xue's got a buddy abd all, despite her ratting him out at some point. lol
and wow! aside from jessica, there's hara chasing at his tail! he better practice his hiding skills to get past them. anyway, thanks again for choosing jinruk and i'll be looking forward to the next updates ^^
smhh9837
#8
Chapter 3: Congrats to aniyababo^^ cant wait to see who else is chosen!