Chapter 1: Wow I'm not even sure if you'll see this (more than like six months since you posted I think) but this was really good ^^ I love how the storyline sort of tugs at all the right heartstrings (if that makes any sense) and the character relationship was really accurate I think. It was easy imagining being in the same situation so yay for that. I hope to read more from you haha :)

Chapter 1: though the point of view was a bit confusing for some minor parts (or maybe it's just me orz), this was really good and worth the read! but it's mainly refreshing because there isn't a lot of krishun fics out there. also i have a weak spot for fics where kris isn't someone who is head of a department, like what writers more than often depict him as. the ending sentence was a beautiful finish off. loved this! :>

Chapter 1: This starts really promising. I think I'm already in love with it :) Kris as a firefighter has been nagging me for a long time so I'm really glad someone came up with the idea and portray him as one. Also I'm a huge er for Sehun as a doc (I'd like to think that he would be a great one if he didn't choose to pursue career as EXO member) so you have me hooked :)

I'm curious about their future progress as I can see they both are in some kind of depression; they aren't happy. They live but are so lifeless at the same time. So... grey. As if living didn't bring them joy. I see Kris questioning his life choices after father's death, lost the main reason why he even chose to be the person who he is now.
Ahh me and my overanalyze of things... that isn't even accurate hah so I better stop.

Anyway, You finished in good moment as I can't wait to read what Kris'memory loss will bring to both of them.
Keep it up and good luck with next chapters!:)