The Rain's Tears: Kookie_97

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Story: The Rain's Tears

Author's profile link: Kookie_97

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First Impression: The first impression was great. My expectations were high. Merely by looking at the dark colors and title, I knew it was going to be angst. However, your impression was good, not great.

Story Title: Your title is giving me a hard time; I don't know if I like it, or hate it. It has all the elements a title should have, but I just feel like something is missing. I'm assuming it's because the term you used is common (emphasis on assuming). I'm somewhat lost because I sincerely don't know why I'm impassive. Although, If I was browsing to pick a story to read, I would probably pass by your story.

Poster/Background Bonus: This segment of the review is where I get super-duperly cr

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invisible_girl #1 Jun 18, 2016 05:57:33

Chapter 3: I would like to cancel my request.
Username: invisible_girl
Story title: 5 Advantages Of Dating a Policeman

Min_ErChan12 #2 Dec 2, 2015 23:09:37

(Request are closed atm.sorry and thanks)

Min_ErChan12 #3 Dec 2, 2015 23:06:06

(everyone this is the admin_MinErChan12..Sorry to inform u guys..We are quite busy with our school or real life's here but we will see what we can do in the mean time!Sorry guys!)

invisible_girl #4 Apr 23, 2015 09:05:21

Chapter 3: Hi, I've requested at your shop. Unfortunately, due to my upcoming exams, I am forced to deactivate my AFF account for a month. I know that some shops may have objections about it, but I'm addicted to this side, and it makes me read fanfics, while I should be reading my Biology textbook. However, my point is, I don't want to cancel my request, because I'm definitely coming back, but I won't be able to pick it up until the 19th of May. (Approximately), and here some designers/reviewers have a problem. When I log back in, the first thing I do, is to check the shop, see if my request is completed, pick it up, and credit the shop. Don't worry about that.

You can postpone my request, and do other people's requests which are behind me in the queue.

Thank you, and I hope you won't blacklist me or anything.

invisible_girl

JaiGuanlin #5 Feb 8, 2015 21:15:08

I've requested for a review~

invisible_girl #6 Feb 8, 2015 11:23:43

Hi, I just want to ask if you don't forget about my request. I rquested for a review it like 4 months ago, and I'm not even on a request list. Did I do something wrong?

azxema #7 Feb 7, 2015 18:48:10

picked up my review c :

summerdust #8 Feb 7, 2015 07:27:42

hi ^^ just wanna ask if you receive my request? or did i fill up the form wrong? thanks

yehet061190 #9 Feb 6, 2015 23:53:57

Thank you for the review. It helped me so much!^^
Sorry for late.

inspiritxbaby #10 Feb 6, 2015 07:46:05

Submitted 2 requests, thanks~