Wuyifan95 :

REVIEWED BY (PINKU) ♡ Title: A little too dull and boring as this title is commonly used among fan fiction writers. Overall: 3/5 ~ Graphic/Poster: Good! Good choice of shop! Haha xD Overall: 4/5 ~ Foreword: Again, its too ordinary. I don't expect you to come up with 100+ (Okay, I was overexaggerating :P) vocabulary to fill up the space but I suggest that you should focus the main point of the story. Cut away all the unnecessary dialogues and sentences. ~ Description: Hm, seems interesting. Good of you to explain the title of your story. Overall: 10/15 ~ Characterization: Not much details but I could somehow guess the personality of them. Somehow. Overall: 5/10 ~ Grammar and Spelling: Hm, I do spot some here and there. Its not bad though. Overall: 21/30 ~ Plot/Originality/Flow: Simple and good. I believe that your story is kind of original, not much mixture or confusion here and there. The flow was a little slow as you were focusing only on a few scenes. Try to sum up those scenes (or actions) so it doesn't look too messy or unnecessary. Overall: 14/20 ~ Bonus/Overall Enjoyment : It was a nice story to read but I suggest you to add in some complications? (: Overall: 12/15  ~ Overall : 69/100   Fantascape : REVIEWED BY MY_TAENG04 ♡ Title: I'm bit embarassed to say this actually >< Well, I don't understand what's the meaning of Tabula Rasa. But as I saw the title, which is very rare, it caught my interest to read it. As I seacrhed, Tabula Rasa means "blank state", explaining Kyungsoo, am I right? Haha XD.  Overall: 5/5 ~ Foreword: Simple forward that somehow explained the story a bit. Love it. <3 Description: Nice one. Although I understood it after reading like more than 10+ times. Lol XD. But it's great on how you used those 'higher' words. Overall: 13/15 ~ Characterization: Very very simple. But I understood it. Just nice. However, if you add just a little more about their personality, it'll be very perfect. Overall: 6/10 ~  Grammar and Spelling: Your grammar and spelling are perfect. Although some of the words you use are beyond my 'vocabulary' since I'm still 13. haha XD. Well, that's my mistake. Anyway, its very perfect.Overall: 28/30 ~ Plot/Originality/Flow: I don't have anything else to say. Because it's very clear that your story are so good. Just fasten it a little and it'll be great ^^ Overall: 16/20 ~ Bonus/Overall Enjoyment: I enjoy it very much! <3 Since Baekhyun and Kyungsoo are my favorite 'together character' in EXO! <3 They are very cute. *whisper* But I love Jongin with Kyungsoo too! <3 Overall: 14/15 ~                 Overall: 82/95    Yeollists : yeol。   DIRTY BEAT ♡ ♡  ♡ REVIEWED BY FANTASCAPE ♡ Title: That title was y... It's simple and easy to remember, but the name made me think it had to do with dancing rather than a heartbeat. Overall: 4/5 ~ Graphic/Poster: The poster is beautiful and it uses the sensual shades of red wonderfully with that tinge of black! Overall: 5/5 ~ Foreword: A simple explanation complete with a few kudos. It may have done better with a quote or two... Description: It was eloquent and short. It was simple enough for the ty value of the fic. Overall: 13/15 ~Characterization: There's a slight depth to Jongin's character. His psychological turmoil (manipulation, neglect, etc.) is deep. However, there are still plenty of cliche 'dominant seme' and 'submissive uke' themes here... Suho's shy and good-natured persona just fades behind Kai's... Overall: 5/10 ~  Grammar and Spelling: Your grammar and spelling are fine overall! There were a handful of typos, but that was it. Overall: 29/30 ~ Plot/Originality/Flow: There was no originality. I'm so sorry to say this but I saw about 20 similar doujinshis and fics when I read this. It was predictable and incredibly overdone what with the borderline abusive seme student, the frightened (but learning to 'love' it) blackmailed instructor uke, and the extra male character thrown in as a plot device for jealousy and angry/possessive ... Luckily the flow was fine, especially for a fic. Overall: 9/20 ~ Bonus/OverallEnjoyment: I feel that if you emphasized the psychological mess that Jongin was in a bit more, I'd have enjoyed it further. It was well-written, down to the ... But like I said, I saw so many other fics in this  Overall: 14/15 ~                 Overall: 79/100 

 

Yifanforever :

yifanforever。   LOSING RESONANCE ♡ ♡  ♡ REVIEWED BY FANTASCAPE ♡ Title: I abosultely loved the title. It's simple and elegant- displaying a deeper, more intelligent level than something like "The Hoarder". Resonance- the ability to evoke images or memories... It's brilliant considering the plot! Overall: 5/5 ~ Graphic/Poster: Lovely and simple! I found the overall pale coloration to do KaiSoo's faces not an ounce of justice, but it's still eye-catching! Overall: 4/5 ~ Foreword: Simple breakdown of the story complete with a note from the author. I'd have liked a quote here, but only because this story has so many memorable ones! Description: Beautiful way to relay the synopis with such little space. It was informative without being too revealing. Overall: 14/15 ~ Characterization: The characters each have 'layers'- even Jongin whose layers I look forward to seeing soon. There's a psychological elegance that underlies each of them! Overall: 10/10 ~  Grammar and Spelling: Your spelling and grammar is spot-on. I caught a handful of typos every now and again, but they were too few and far in between to count much off on. Overall: 29/30 ~ Plot/Originality/Flow: Why is this all one category!? Haha, the plot is unique and so very jarring. I've never seen anyone put 'hoarding' in such a way- a way of keeping memories that one would otherwise use. It was gorgeous! I found it orginal in every way. I think the sentences could have 'flowed' a bit better, but that's just my personal writing preference, so I can't truly take off for that. Overall: 20/20 ~ Bonus/OverallEnjoyment: I'm a er for psychological fics! I loved reading this story so much and I'm glad to say I subscribed! Good luck on your next chapter! I'd DEEPLY appreciate it if you also checked out my own fic ;) Overall: 14/15 ~

 

Htnever :

htnever。                        KARYON-DON'T OPEN YOUR EYES♡ ♡ HTNEVER REVIEWED BY (Pinku) ♡

Title : Interesting. It had the sci-fi kind of feel.

Overall : 4/5

Graphic/Poster : A little too plain and simple. Choose a designer that are able to produce more realistic poster.

Overall : 3/5

Foreword/Description : Great! I like how the way you described the description! It gives the reader a further detail on the characters and how the story is going to be like~ Lovely quote from Yuri! Haha!~

Overall : 13/15

Characterization : Good! It may be a little disturbing at some scenes but its fine!~

Overall : 7/10

Grammar and Spelling : Since its edited, the grammar and spelling are okay.

Overall : 25/30

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