Chapter 1: I really wanted to read my slave. The kaisoo story. Is there any way to reupload the story or repost it or something? The trailer looked so good.
Chapter 34: The trailer was nicely done and I have a liking to it, but just a few things that I see that don't fit (need fixing), which is particularly the scene with Jonghyun since he is not in the story and not Taeyeon's boyfriend in the fanfic.(Xiah Junsu was her boyfriend that caused them part) That can be quite misleading. I can understand finding a video can be difficult, but I found this taesu video. Maybe you can piece something out of it in it-or add separate clips of Taeyeon and Junsu. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2rbd7C-M5eg
Also when the first scene of Jessica and Taeyeon comes up there should be a 's' after best friend to make it best friends.
At 0:10 where it shows Girls Generation it only show six members, I think something else would better fit there. This video at 3:10 would fit better. The ot9 feels ; A ; https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bWI2klBuWAM
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