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Paper Hearts || Review Shop

≈Offering constructive criticism since 2014≈

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Status:

Open / Closed Temporarily / Busy / Hiatus / Hiring / Revamp / Closed Permanently

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Updates:

08.06.2014 | Shop Opened

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Rules:

- Subscribe. Don't unsubscribe even after you've receiving your review.

- Upvotes are highly appreciated :3

- No bashing unless you'd like a spot in the blacklist.

- Please don't rush me. Be patient as I'm the only one running this shop T.T

- Request by filling up the form below. Please be sure to fill it up properly.

- You may request as many times as you'd like

- Password: PaperHearts

- I have the right to refuse any stories but don't worry, that's unlikely of me

- Accepted Genres: All, including M-Rated but no PWP

- Accepted Pairings: All, including & Yuri

- Cancelling your request? Comment below. Deleting your story? Comment below. Draft status? Comment below.

- Please do not set your stories to 'subscribers-only'

- Please allow text selection. It'll be easier for me T.T

- Remember to credit me and this shop (I'll check). Should you not credit within 1 week, you'll earn a spot in the blacklist after the third warning. Should you have any difficulties crediting, let me know in advance through commenting.

- Please comment once you have received your review :)

- Re-dos are allowed but only request for one when you've made the necessary changes

- Feel free to ask me any questions ;)

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Rubrics for Reviews:

-Introduction (First Impressions)

- Title

- Description & Foreword

- Plot

- Consistency

- Character Development

- Style of Writing > Grammar + Vocabulary

- Overall

P.S. There won't be a point system. I don't see a point of using it since I'm only here to give you constructive criticism :)

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- Author:

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- Co-Author (If any):

- Profile Link (If any):

- Story Title:

- Story Link: 

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- Genre:

- Story Type [Oneshot, Chaptered etc.]:

-Story Status [Ongoing,Completed]:

-Characters:

- Type of Pairing (Straight, , Yuri etc.)

- Rated (Yes/No):

- If yes, state type (Violence, ual Content, Self-Harm, Triggers etc.)

- Summary:

- Is English Your First Language:

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teukiezeroed #1
Author: teukiezeroed

- Profile Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/profile/view/68753

- Co-Author (If any):

- Profile Link (If any):

- Story Title: Into his Gravity

- Story Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/633886

- Poster Link (If any): http://i.imgur.com/y4gXQeC.jpg

- Genre: Angst, Drama

- Story Type Chaptered

-Story Status Ongoing

-Characters: Luhan, two OCs (Maeri & Jinri)

- Type of Pairing: Straight

- Rated: Yes

- If yes, state type: ual Content, Fould Words

- Summary: It's about 2 bestfriends. They fell apart after the girl confessed. And several years after, Luhan is running after her and she soon became his mistress (not in the story yet tho)

- Is English Your First Language: Nope

- Anything Specific Parts You'd Like Me to Focus On:

- Do You Have A Specific Deadline For The Review: You can take as much time you need. :)

- Anything Else: It's a sequel. :) The prequel is just a very short one shot so you can read it ^^

- Password: PaperHearts
blueleeyoorae #2
- Author: blueleeyoorae

- Profile Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/profile/view/434496

- Co-Author (If any): none

- Profile Link (If any): none

- Story Title: So, It's You

- Story Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/695939/so-it-s-you-romance-taeyeon-you-exo-luhan-sehun-baekhyun

- Poster Link (If any): http://i7.minus.com/ibsQcwW8suP00l.png

- Genre: Romance

- Story Type [Oneshot, Chaptered etc.]: Chaptered

-Story Status [Ongoing,Completed]: On-going

-Characters: Luhan, OC, Baekhyun

- Type of Pairing (Straight, , Yuri etc.) straight

- Rated (Yes/No): No

- Summary: A story about Kim Taeyeon's sister, Kim Kyungmi who has a really harsh life. She then is introduced to EXO by her sister and since then, her life changes drastically.

- Is English Your First Language: No

- Anything Specific Parts You'd Like Me to Focus On: Grammar, story plot, character development, and the flow of the story

- Do You Have A Specific Deadline For The Review: No, actually. as long as it doesn't take a month

- Anything Else: None

- Password: PaperHearts
donbaekwood #3
- Author: donbaekwood

- Profile Link: https://www.asianfanfics.com/profile/view/739295

- Co-Author (If any): -

- Profile Link (If any): -

- Story Title: Wanted: Dr. Zhang

- Story Link: https://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/755404/wanted-dr-zhang-romance-originalcharacter-exo-baekhyun-lay-yixing

- Poster Link (If any): -

- Genre: romance, drama, angst, M

- Story Type [Oneshot, Chaptered etc.]: Chaptered

-Story Status [Ongoing,Completed]: Ongoing

-Characters: OC, Zhang Yixing, Byun Baekhyun, Park Chanyeol, Oh Sehun

- Type of Pairing (Straight, , Yuri etc.): Straight

- Rated (Yes/No): Yes

- If yes, state type (Violence, ual Content, Self-Harm, Triggers etc.): Violence, ual Content, Self-Harm

- Summary: Zhang Yixing is the nation's top doctor, and he's wanted, dead or alive.

- Is English Your First Language: No

- Anything Specific Parts You'd Like Me to Focus On: Anything :D

- Do You Have A Specific Deadline For The Review: Anytime :D

- Anything Else: I'm a bit nervous, but please give me your honest opinion! ^_^ Thank you ~

- Password: PaperHearts
wonpokemon #4
hello, i just had a new user name change and was previously known as SzeneryHeights, thanks. ^^
wonpokemon #5
- Author: [at the time] glaceskies [but finished as] SzeneryHeights
- Profile Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/profile/view/117106
- Co-Author: n/a
- Profile Link: n/a
- Story Title: 银河系 [Sea of Stars]
- Story Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/724389
- Poster Link: http://i.imgur.com/KykUBhn.png
- Genre: [varies] sliceoflife, modernau, romance, comedy, fluff, fantasy, supernatural
- Story Type: chaptered
- Story Status: completed
- Characters: Ariel (OC) x Kris (OOC) [minor: Derrick Hoh, Luhan, Lay]
- Type of Pairing: straight
- Rated: no
- If yes, state type: n/a
- Summary: Ariel and Yifan met when they were younger and spent a few days together. One day, Yifan leaves and Ariel never saw him again. Years later, they meet again, but this time Ariel has no recollection of Yifan. Yifan is still very aware of her existence and is unsure on how to approach Ariel that she knew him from her past.
- Is English Your First Language: yes
- Anything Specific Parts You'd Like Me to Focus On: not really
- Do You Have A Specific Deadline For The Review: nope [take your time if you need to. ^^]
- Anything Else: nope not really, but thanks a lot!~ =]
- Password: PaperHearts
wishing_on_a_star #6
- Author: wishing_on_a_star

- Profile Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/profile/view/680330

- Co-Author (If any):

- Profile Link (If any):

- Story Title: Like You

- Story Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/785953/like-you-jaebum-romance-you-got7-got7jb

- Poster Link (If any):

- Genre: Romance

- Story Type [Oneshot, Chaptered etc.]: Oneshot

-Story Status [Ongoing,Completed]: Completed

-Characters: OC and GOT7's JB

- Type of Pairing (Straight, , Yuri etc.) Straight

- Rated (Yes/No): No

- If yes, state type (Violence, ual Content, Self-Harm, Triggers etc.)

- Summary: JB likes his best friend's girlfriend, and he regrets not confessing first to her, but lets go of her as to not risk their friendship

- Is English Your First Language: No

- Anything Specific Parts You'd Like Me to Focus On: None

- Do You Have A Specific Deadline For The Review: Nope

- Anything Else: thanks~

- Password: PaperHearts
searchingmyself #7
- Author: shiningtiara

- Profile Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/profile/view/543427

- Story Title: Chasing your shadow

- Story Link: : http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/601980/chasing-your-shadow-changmin-siwon-yoosu-yunjae-mpreg-heavyangst-cuteromance


- Poster Link (If any): http://i904.photobucket.com/albums/ac249/shiningtiara/tumblr_n97qm00opV1sqnerso1_500_zpsdb2eab5e.png

- Genre: angst, romance,

- Story Type [Oneshot, Chaptered etc.]: chaptered

-Story Status [Ongoing,Completed]: completed

-Characters: Kim Jaejoong, Jung Yunho

- Type of Pairing (Straight, , Yuri etc.)

- Rated (Yes/No): No

- If yes, state type (Violence, ual Content, Self-Harm, Triggers etc.). slightly depressing

- Summary: Yunho and Jaejoong loves each other they even got married but something happened and Yunho left Jaejoong behind, alone with his son but Jaejoong believes in his true love that if he keep waiting for him one day... maybe one day he will meet him again.

- Is English Your First Language: No

- Anything Specific Parts You'd Like Me to Focus On: English is not my first language so I am not very confident with Grammar, spelling, punctuation, flow, characterization etc. Please give me detailed review so I can improve my writing.

- Do You Have A Specific Deadline For The Review: No. take your time:)

- Anything Else: Take your time I will wait patiently Thank you for your hard work:)



- Password: PaperHearts
redocean- #8
Author: redocean-

Profile Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/profile/view/38093

Story Title: away from the shadows, destroyed by the light

Story Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/783759

Poster Link (If any): http://1.bp.blogspot.com/-g4LDcFLI5AY/U8NkUawdBtI/AAAAAAAAAQ8/EAKpN0negi8/s1600/2014-07-14+00.50.57.png

Genre: angst/psychological

Story Type [Oneshot, Chaptered etc.]: oneshot

Story Status [Ongoing,Completed]: completed

Characters: Kai, Krystal

Type of Pairing (Straight, , Yuri etc.): straight

Rated (Yes/No): yes

If yes, state type (Violence, ual Content, Self-Harm, Triggers etc.): triggers, self-harm, language

Summary: Krystal was trapped in a glass box of excruciating gloom and writhing pain of being alone. With both of her frail legs chained by the daunting remorse of what she believed she did, Krystal was not able to hide from her haunting past – for each time she turned around, her own reflection would remind her of it – so she covered her eyes, not knowing that she was already too fond of the darkness that she was afraid of the light.

Kai wanted to break her free from the glass that had trapped her entire being. But, the light immensely blinded him that he did not realize he was hurting himself in the process of setting her free – he fell in love with her despite knowing it was his suicide.



Is English Your First Language: no

Anything Specific Parts You'd Like Me to Focus On: writing style, characters

Do You Have A Specific Deadline For The Review: this weekend, maybe?

Anything Else: thanks for your time <3

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