Borderline

Description

SuChen; Borderline, NC-17, 49k

There's little worth in a detective that notices the small things. 

Foreword

I wrote this for Critical Capture, and I personally don't think it's very good - mostly my fault as I didn't spend my time to write it very well and rushed like 30k of it in four days and all. But loads of people put effort in it, so here it is ~

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amyeonhaseyo
#1
Chapter 3: This was such a nice read :) it's thrilling, it's angsty at times, it's even hilarious!!! God, I love Junmyeon in this story. His relationship with Hakyeon makes me so envious! Friendship goals, ahhh. And that snark of his--- *chef's kiss*
And Jongdae!! He's a ing maniac here lmaoooo but only for his Junmyeon, mm-hmm. Only for Junmyeon, kyaaaaa~
I'm so happy that I found this gem. Thanks so much for writing it!
artificallove #2
Chapter 3: omg this is now one of my favorite suchen fics!!!! everything was so great about this - the plot the crime and junmyeon especially!!! thank u so much for this masterpiece
zyxzjs_alshiva
#3
this a very very very good fic!!! suspense yet still comedic with a little tinge of . thank you for writing this!!
YandGbaby #4
Chapter 3: Wow just found this story and wow...exciting, funny and AMAZING! Iloved loved loved the relationship between Junmyoeon and Hakyeon :D and the making Jongdae jealous and their quarrel who'd be topping xD pure gold! Loved it, every word written on it. Normally this long chapters get boring but your writing style is amazing and I wouldn't mind reading other stories of yours :)
wejdan #5
Chapter 3: and now we present the best suchen fic of the year award to.../drums sound/..attrachen../hard clap sound/...Congratulations you Deserve it^^
/gives you flowers and cockeis and everything sweet and nice/...how could you!!!how can you!!!write somthing Wonderful and fabulous and Amazing and Beautifull and..and..oh my i cant find the words my feelings for this fic is overlode..omg i could talk about it for years.. T__T..this story made me excited and happy and little bit sad and my eyes tear a little..but overall it was awesome..it is the best the best T H E B E S T suchen fic i ever read T___T i love it i love it so much and i luv u for writing it^^ thank you so much >___< you really made my day<333333