Snacks

No way, no way. Infinite's Sunggyu was standing two feet in front of me. My heart sped up, yet slowed down which caused me to lose all color in my face and lips.

"Your humming is quite nice! Thank you for supporting Infinite!"

Omo. He just thanked me.

"..." I was left speechless. Really, pictures did NOT do Kim Sunggyu justice. His hair was dyed ginger and his smooth, pale complexion glowed. I couldn't see a pore or flaw on his youthful face. An awkward silence started to form when I snapped out of my thoughts and returned to reality. He just looked at me calmly and with patience as if this happened everytime he met a fangirl.

"Ne! Thank you for working so hard. The least I could do is support Infinite!" Aish. Why did I have to sound so amateurish in Korean? Wae!!

"Here, I'll buy Infinite some snacks. You guys must be tired from your schedules."

Sunggyu looked at me with surprise and delight.

"Daebak! You speak such good Korean for a foreigner!"

"Gamsabnida." I said shyly.

I asked him what the boys liked and we casually strolled down the tiny aisles of food as he helped me pick out the snacks and stuff.

He told me that he must hurry back, so I checked out while he stood near the door.He signed a piece of paper and took a selfie with me as payment even though I didn't ask.

"Enjoy the snacks!" I called as he walked away smiling and waving to me.

Already I had had my first star meeting. I suddenly realized how warm my cheecks were and that my palma felt awfully sweaty.

Aigoo. What you do to me, Kim Sunggyu.

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A/N: Thank you to GeniusGyuGraphics for the poster! ^^

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GeniusGyu #1 Jul 22, 2014 23:46:38

Hello,
your poster is done and ready for pick up.
Thanks for requesting from _♥GeniusGyu♥Graphics♥_ [http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/782210]

ExoticSonee #2 Jul 20, 2014 12:13:26

Chapter 1: For a first fanfic, your grammar's pretty decent tbh. I've never read a sunggyuxoc fic, but I think I'll give this a chance. :)
But, I've noticed that the chapters are quite short? Usually, if a chapter surpasses 3,000 words then it's ready to be posted. :3
But this is written in the first POV so summing up 3,000 isn't that hard because when you live alone and not to mention you're now in a different country, you'll find everything interesting.~
But then again, you're new to writing, so I suggest making your vocabulary, as well as your imagination, broader. :)

Skipping parts is okay, but don't over do it.~ Describe the things she sees and what she thinks about it. On the fourth chapter, I could tell that you improved, if you compare it to the first chapter, so props to that. :D Characterization is very important. So far, I have minimal information about her and sunggyu, so I hope you develop their personalities and such on the future chapters.

Lastly, use metaphors from time to time and refrain yourself from using formal phrases. She's just a teenager, so I don't think it's appropriate. :3

Well, that's pretty much it! ^^ I hope I don't sound too harsh. :( Don't worry! We all have those first stories~ as time goes by, you'll eventually improve! :D
Oh, and tag it as "sunggyu". :>
Btw, if you're curious if I write stories or not, I do, but not on this account. ouo

random_reader #3 Jul 19, 2014 22:19:43

Chapter 3: This sounds good for a first fanfic :) . I don't like you/oc fanfic, but this one is not too hard to read for me lol. Good job, keep updating so more people will notice your story ^^!