Minha has been experiencing artist’s block recently. A strange dream brings her inspiration, but it also brings a number of uninvited guests into her apartment and her life.
Chapter 13: This is a really unique plot, I never read a fic about the seven sins before and I like it a lot :) As a fellow female university student I feel a little bad for Minha now though.. and my first thoughts after reading about the pregnancy where whether she would bear Jesus or the antichrist xD'
Chapter 13: I was both grateful and impressed that you left this section somewhat open for interpretation.
2.) When Min-Ha Was In A "Second Conscience":
I swear, my mind traveled to a different dimension after reading this difficult to write, yet excellently presented portion of the work. The feeling was somehow all too familiar, the reason unbeknownst to my kerfuzzled brain. Have all humans experienced this feeling at one time or another?
Anyhow, my senses delved deeper into such realms that I didn't have any senses left at all. No color, no vividness pertaining to eyesight. Just … knowledge. For some odd reason, it didn't strike me as a foreign feeling; rather, it was a fascinating and familiar one. In spite of the loss of all five of my senses and the introduction to a new one, my emotions remained intact. How to describe it any further, I have but no clue.
I did not feel as though I wasted even one minute of time reading this. Thank you so much for giving up yoir busy schedule to write this, and I must say that I will probably be reading this again and again, along with its sequel.
It's evident that your natural ease with vocabulary application and sentence fluency assisted you greatly in making this story seem "alive," a trait in which I will not argue with. Your description continues to overwhelm me with feeling; each piece of information provides me with enough detail to depict the imagery with a lucid mind, yet not too much as to specify every attribute within it. This is one aspect of writers that I feel truly defines their position as one, and because you have never failed to exceed my standards, I am thoroughly impressed and have much respect for you.
On the other hand (as seen from your "Bonus Chapter"), what seems to have troubled you most is the intricate planning, organization, and experimentation required to evolve yoir ideas into an engaging story. I do agree with you on the part where you stated that you occasionally went overboard with the descriptions, but in a way that you could not find a proper place for the character descriptions to be placed. (I assume that this is due to mind exhaustion.) However, you've exhausted your mind on the right places. The key factors needed for the plotline to be interpretable and flowing were well-organized and efficiently scrutinized. Only the minor areas needed to be repositioned were not as up to par, which I shall blame on already exerting the majority of your effort on the major areas that would require deep thought and thorough processing to avoid creating a ish story. Otherwise, everything was flawless! (And I suppose your organizational skills are above average due to your interest in the fueld of science?)
My favorite parts:
1.) When Sung-Gyu Touched The Painting:
I can't lie: This part really made me imagine. Because it was not as solidified in structure, my imagination went on a whim of its own and began to picture the various possibilities of how Sung-Gyu and Min-Ha could be feeling.
Chapter 13: I remember reading this when I was a ghost/lurker. Infinite really lend themselves to the Seven Sins type of fics I think being well yeah seven and of varying personality. The bonus chapter is quite nice it's like havin an interview with the author~ the story itself I liked but I was hoping for an epic war for freedom… quite used to "big" miracles. The growth of your is pretty clear from all the flip flop reading I've been doing, you've gone from "not bad" to "really good" in my opinion.
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