Against The Dark ϟ

Author: --TwinPopsicles
Genre: action, fantasy, supernatural
Characters: OC, EXO, Infinite
Status: Ongoing
Chapters: 29+
Description:

An Angel and A Demon,
or in this case; Demons
They loved her with a fierce desire
that no chains and locks can keep them away
She loved them with a serenity so pure
that the moon shone on her brighter every passing night.
But this love was unacceptable,
To put it in simple words,
A forbidden love,
that shouldn't have happened but did.
Heaven and Hellm light and dark,
never are they bound to mix; It was wrong.
That the stars themselves gave them a warning,
telling them, they weren't meant to be.
But heck, they were demons
They were made to defy and ignore the rules.
But her,
An Angel, that was made to follow heavenly rules.
Is she going to break more rules and sacrifice what she has left
just for love?
A life where everything was balance but ever lasting sorrow
or a life where they were judged but forever more be together.
Which would you choose?
Which would they choose?

 

Lovi's opinion:

❝Even though there are many 'good vs bad' or 'angels-demons' fics out there I found that this one had an interesting plot development, the writing style was neat and easy to read with no grammatical or spelling errors.
What didn't make me add this story as favourite was that as the story proceeds the plot development is getting a bit slow and the fact that the updates are irregular don't help maintaining the initial level of interest.
But then, I remind you this is my personal opinion.❞

Plot originality: 3.5/5
Grammar / writing errors: 4.5/5
Pace: slow
Character development: med-slow
Update status: irregular/slow