Confessions and a Not-so-goodnight sleep!

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No One's POV


They were still frozen, not until Haemi came back to her senses pushed herself from San Cheong.


Minho then looked at San Cheong seriously. "Dinner table, now."


Haemi prepared to deepen her voice and act like a guy. 


Minho sternly asked San Cheong "Who is she?"


Haemi then spoke deepening her voice "What do you mean by that? I'm completely a guy."


With that San Cheong made an imaginary facepalm. *You idiot.*


Minho then scoffed. "It tells from your feminine features that your a girl." He said pointing at Haemi.


Haemi blushed in embarrasment but quickly washed it away because she remembered she was a dude.


Minho turned his attention to San Cheong. "Who told you to bring a girl here?"


San Cheong nervously explained " Well... I-I was actually following her to her house but then I saw she was beaten up by her dad..."


One thing San Cheong knows in this world is that you can't lie to Minho. You can't. He's a freaking mind reader. Trust me.


Minho then raised his hand. "Wait up! So you're telling me she was beaten up by her dad?" 


San Cheong nodded.


Minho turned his attention to Haemi "Is this true?"


Haemi rolled his eyes. "You don't freaking care about my family business."


Minho sighed. "Well then if that's the case, you can't stay here if you can't give me a good reason"


Haemi furiously shouted "What?!"


Haemi's POV

What's this tall guy saying?! Does he even know I'm still a girl?!


*scoff* Besides these brothers are both the same. Both ruthless.


But... I can't stay outside! *panics*


I mean it's like -0.99 degrees outside! 


A person would turn to ice just by stepping outside! Okay, I'm exaggerating... But it's really really really cold outside!


I then shouted "Fine! Yes, I am beaten up by my dad! Happy? Now can I stay?"


"Then... who works in the "Family"?" Minho asked curious.


*Man! This dude is sure nosy* I frowned "Why are you so into my family business?!"


The tall guy folded his arms.


I sighed giving up "I work."


The tall guy nodded understanding. "Well if that's the case you can stay here. On one condition."


"What?" I asked bored.


"Let us borrow your time and body."


I choked on my saliva and had widened eyes.


San Cheong's POV


I suddenly had eyes as big as saucers! 


What does this hyung mean?! 


No One's POV


Minho guided the limping Haemi to the kitchen where lots of dishes awaits to be washed.


Haemi looked at Minho confused "What do you want me to do?"


Minho folded his arms. "Wash it. All of it."


"Wait wait wait. Would you just get to the point of this so called borrow your time and body?"


Minho came infront of her and said "I would like for you to be our part time maid."


Haemi smirked "You think I would do that?"


Minho then looked at his nails sassingly "Well... if you want to sleep outside everytime your dad beats you. And besides I'm offering salary of 50,000 Won it would be a great help to you and your dad, but if you don't wa--"


She widened her eyes at her salary and cutted him off  "I'll take it!"


San Cheong was shocked. "Hyung! You can't just give out

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I'm sorry if I'm putting this in draft status. Becasue I want to edit a lot in this story and add more details to it..

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arachii #1
Chapter 10: but... now that i'm thinking of it..... my fangirl feelings says that if haemi ends up with luhan... it will be really cool.. but then i remember san cheong and i want him to stay with haemi... uugh i dont know what to think anymore
arachii #2
Chapter 10: omg sancheong must've been so jealous deep inside -q!!! and the kris thing... it's really sad right? he is my bias and all i wanted was him to be happy T^T
arachii #3
Chapter 9: HE HER?!?! omg it's so sad :'( and luhan... what he did is something that if i was in his place i would've done the exact same thing -qq not on purpose of course... but this sounds like me. kkkk
arachii #4
Chapter 8: sfsjlfojbb ARE YOU TRYING TO KILL ME??? hahaha just kidding ><.. anyway, every end of chapter you leave something to explain in the next one and thats very clever!! you're like the chick from "One Thousand and One Nights" hahaha >< ok... i embarrassed myself again ><... btw.. this chapter 8 *O* i can see them kissing already ewdghbdt *fangirling*
arachii #5
Chapter 7: you are a great author!! i really like your writing.. i mean.. the way you write is just.... "asdfghjklç" perfect!!! i'm sorry for my awful english ><... i just want to say that you are great >.<!! ok byee *runs away because of self embarrassment*
NamiHyuNmi
#6
Chapter 1: Also don't keep changing the povs on the middle it gets confusing. If you need to show what both the characters are doing, write in the 3rd persons pov, it's easier.
NamiHyuNmi
#7
Chapter 1: Im really glad I found this story! THANK YOU♥ but here's a advice, you have potential and the story line is great but you should try and improve your writing. Like add in more details about the characters, especially the girl. It'll help alot in imagining the story. Also your spellings are wrong here and there, just give a check. ^^ I hope I didn't hurt your feelings.
Coolcutiedj #8
Chapter 4: Cool story. So I researched on JJCC And found out they're quite cool! ^_^
arachii #9
Chapter 3: omo this is really awesome!!! you are great author-nim ^^