Pain and Treatment

That's my Dude
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San Cheong's POV

I followed her outside the campus. So yeah, you may say I'm stalking her and that may sound creepy, but no. Following is different from stalking and I Choi Ha Don am not a stalker.


I followed her until  she reached down in an alley. She crawled down a fence. Maybe her shortcut?


She ended up in a little bit worn out house. So she lives here...


I quickly took a picture of her house and planned to send it to the queenkas number (yes,I have their number, but their still annoying) to humiliate her.


But before I could even press Send I heard a loud yell, and her being, kicked outside?


I walked to her noticing blood on her lips and a bruise on her shin.


Haemi's POV


I felt someone following me. Or is it just me? Nevermind.


I crawled down the fence I used to scratch when I was a kid. I've got to hurry.


I opened the house seeing my dad. He's drunk again.


I picked up the trash around and sighed. "Appa, how many times have you been doing this? It's not good for your health"


My dad chuckled darkly " health, haha.. My wife is dead because of you!"


It was the same thing everyday. So I just assisted him to his room when he pushed me.


He looked at me with hate. "Don't put your dirty hands on me! You're not my daughter you piece of !" He slapped me.


I felt blood trickle on my lips. But I didn't cry, there's no use to it. I simply stood up and still helped him. He's my only family left...


"I said dont touch me!" my dad yelled kicking my leg and I hissed in pain.


With that my dad yelled at me "Get out... Get out of my fu*king house!!" 


I stood up slowly walked to the door when he kicked my back harder then I fell. 


It was the same pain everyday. "Ah. I think I broke my ankle"


Then I saw someone step in front of me. I looked up shocked of who is infront of me.


No One's POV


San Cheong was shocked to what kind of life Haemi was having.


When Haemi saw him, she was shocked but hid it with a smirk. "Okay, now you see the real me. Go on! tease me, bully me, tell this to the whole school! I dont care... If it's just the same pain everyday..."


Sa

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I'm sorry if I'm putting this in draft status. Becasue I want to edit a lot in this story and add more details to it..

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arachii #1
Chapter 10: but... now that i'm thinking of it..... my fangirl feelings says that if haemi ends up with luhan... it will be really cool.. but then i remember san cheong and i want him to stay with haemi... uugh i dont know what to think anymore
arachii #2
Chapter 10: omg sancheong must've been so jealous deep inside -q!!! and the kris thing... it's really sad right? he is my bias and all i wanted was him to be happy T^T
arachii #3
Chapter 9: HE HER?!?! omg it's so sad :'( and luhan... what he did is something that if i was in his place i would've done the exact same thing -qq not on purpose of course... but this sounds like me. kkkk
arachii #4
Chapter 8: sfsjlfojbb ARE YOU TRYING TO KILL ME??? hahaha just kidding ><.. anyway, every end of chapter you leave something to explain in the next one and thats very clever!! you're like the chick from "One Thousand and One Nights" hahaha >< ok... i embarrassed myself again ><... btw.. this chapter 8 *O* i can see them kissing already ewdghbdt *fangirling*
arachii #5
Chapter 7: you are a great author!! i really like your writing.. i mean.. the way you write is just.... "asdfghjklç" perfect!!! i'm sorry for my awful english ><... i just want to say that you are great >.<!! ok byee *runs away because of self embarrassment*
NamiHyuNmi
#6
Chapter 1: Also don't keep changing the povs on the middle it gets confusing. If you need to show what both the characters are doing, write in the 3rd persons pov, it's easier.
NamiHyuNmi
#7
Chapter 1: Im really glad I found this story! THANK YOU♥ but here's a advice, you have potential and the story line is great but you should try and improve your writing. Like add in more details about the characters, especially the girl. It'll help alot in imagining the story. Also your spellings are wrong here and there, just give a check. ^^ I hope I didn't hurt your feelings.
Coolcutiedj #8
Chapter 4: Cool story. So I researched on JJCC And found out they're quite cool! ^_^
arachii #9
Chapter 3: omo this is really awesome!!! you are great author-nim ^^