And I Lose My Focus (I Hear Your Voice Calling My Name)

Description

His mission this time was as easy as it could get. Find that one person – the only one who always sat alone at the table in the coffee shop on the street corner and ‘erase’ him. What he didn’t take in account was the story behind the man in the coffee shop. One conversation, one word slipping pass the mans lips and from an assassin he turned into a protector once again.

Foreword

Title: And I Lose My Focus (I Hear Your Voice Calling My Name)
Reference to: BEAST - Black Paradise
OTP: MyungSoo/SungYeol
Rating: PG-13
Genre: Action, Romance
Dedicated to: This is a part of my Term Paper "Strategies to Improve Quality of Online Amateur Writer Literary Works" as in how to improve fan fiction and it is based on the a questionaire distributed to 70 people.
The winning motives for the story were:

His mission this time was as easy as it could get. Find that one person – the only one who always sat alone at the table in the coffee shop on the street corner and ‘erase’ him. What he didn’t take in account was the story behind the man in the coffee shop. One conversation and from an assassin he turned into a protector.

and

A man of solitude with no friends and family, living hidden away from everyone because of things he has done. His past is locked away behind seven-hundred keys just like his heart and looks like it will stay like that until someone – a complete opposite of his, starts to unlock it and reveal his real nature.

The story was based on the two upper mentioned paragraphs.
I hope you will enjoy it! :D

POSTER BY:
Starlite Graphics

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Lazybones23 #1 Oct 19, 2017 02:25:45

Chapter 1: This was cool. I need more action fics of myungyeol.

crazyeggyeolk #2 Nov 18, 2015 07:02:04

Chapter 1: Goodness! You made mu heart race with great thrill! GOLD IS AN UNDERSTATEMENT FOR THIS FIC! I have always been in great awe when author's portray smart characters cause this just proves that the author himself/herself is beyond smart too! AND GOD YOU DID NOT JUAT PORTRAYED A SMART CHARA BY DEFINITIONS AND WORDS FROM BOOKS AND STUFFS BUT BY A GREAT ESCAPE SCENARIO! Are you a Master Computer to Author-nim? xD Myungsoo's plan is just flawless! This is so beautiful! THANK YOU FOR THIS!

pbpandaa #3 May 26, 2015 12:38:32

Chapter 1: Sequee?!!!! <33 *.*

w123j2 #4 Mar 15, 2015 10:12:47

Chapter 1: That was super exciting i loved it. Tho i could be content with them not being chased any more hahaha. Is there a sequel?

hungrybaekk #5 Dec 28, 2014 13:15:01

Chapter 1: That was pretty exciting! Love it <3

Mimo_The2Yeols #6 Sep 10, 2014 02:30:42

Chapter 1: So both of them become a spy? HAHA SPY MYUNGYEOL xD

minsoph74 #7 May 16, 2014 21:30:57

Chapter 1: whoa! super exciting! awesome fic!

suhojkim81 #8 Apr 30, 2014 06:05:13

~~~~nice~~~~

BabyBanaIsAnInspirit #9 Apr 29, 2014 06:36:36

Chapter 1: Ohhh, Myungyeol feels!!! I really loved this!!

blondemyungsoo #10 Apr 25, 2014 19:03:05

Chapter 1: I really liked this:) it's so action packed and myungyeol is always on the go. I almost want them to just be free and not have to deal with anymore people hunting them down but then the drama and action would end. But overall I really enjoyed the way you wrote this and ended it. :)

Thanks for writing myungyeol♡ I really love your fics and the way you write! I'm trying to go through all of your fics and I'm waiting patiently for can you smile:) jui pov;)