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♕NAME: -Jester                                                                                                                                                                                                              ♕EXPERIENCE: 12-18 Months                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                 

First Impression (9/10)

Oh my goodness, this is so pretty! And I love Park Sora! And Kai <3 There were though teeny-weeny, midget things that were distracting.

Theme (9.5/10)

I definitely see light angst, but there's a small vibe of romance in this just because your poster feels 'dreamy', which is still fine :D

Composition & Balance (18/20)

No problems here really, the only minor issue is the positioning of your characters. I think they could be moved a little bit more to the right, just to fill up some of the negative space on that side.

Selection of Textures, Stock & Characters (19/20)

I think all the images used were perfect, I just think Sora's image was a bit LQ.

Typography  (8/10)

The fonts used for your title were great, however I wasn't feeling the fonts used for your watermark and quote. I personally think that font isn't appropriate for light angst. Simple, cursive fonts are usually more appropriate, or even the font used for 'Beyond' or something similar would have been fine.

Colouring  (8/10)

I thought the colouring for this was great. I loved the purple and blue hues. The characters were matching which was good. I just thought there could have been a little more colour added to balance all the white.

Use of Techniques (10/10)

No problems here. Your blending skills were excellent!

Overall (9/10)

Great poster! Very nice. Just be extra aware of your choice of font and positioning, but yeah just VERY minor things.

TOTAL SCORE: 90.5/100

Yaaaay! First review to get 90+! Special mention to petrabigail and MinYeollie for getting 89 :D I feel so bad to be closing and not be around long to feature your review! I'll feature as long as I'm able to be around :D Congrats! You did well.

Miane27 ♕

 

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-Jester #1
Chapter 8: I understand what you mean for the quote and credits font. It's actually the same font as 'Beyond' but I guess it looked weird as a smaller font size. I also see what you mean about adding more color especially since Kai is white overall.
Thank you for reviewing, I really appreciate it ^^
bottleofdreams #2
Chapter 8: Hihi, thanks for the special mention, I'm honored! ^o^
I really hope you'll re-open this though *pouts*
Btw, the graphic is really pretty! *-*
Ascending #3
Chapter 7: thank you for the review! i know my coloring still and im trying to work on it. also, i realized after words that i had actually misspelled the title. but i know what you meant by too big of font and the character positioning. im still trying the learn so thank you for your thoughts:) im not so much concerned about karma points so thats fine. hope you'll be able to open this shop back up in the future^^
-dearmydeer #4
Chapter 6: Thank you so much for the review! I kinda wanted to aim for a simple poster, but I'll change it! ^^
bottleofdreams #5
Chapter 3: It's such a pity :"(
But it's okay, family is more important anyway ;)
Just hoping that someday you'll comeback and open this again
hoshie-- #6
Chapter 5: Thanks for the review! I'll definetly credit you once i get on my laptop.
I think i'll request here again next time :)
-Jester #7
Chapter 3: It's understandable, family is more important and I wish you and your family well.
Take care ^^
bottleofdreams #8
Chapter 2: Wow! Thank you so much! This is the highest score I've ever received so far! And I like your ways of reviewing, it's exactly on the spot. I'll definitely request again from you (maybe not long after this ^^)
And I want to get your permission to copy and paste this review on my blog, I'll credit for sure!
Again, thanks :DD
-Jester #9
Requested :]
Ascending #10
i requested^^
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