Train

Description

Luhan has grown up with the feeling of wind rushing through his hair as the trains roar by, and he's not sure when those memories warp into comforting adrenaline as he runs over the line he's so carefully stayed behind.

Foreword

some stupid xiuhan thing i wrote at 11:30pm on a school night when i realised that nobody gives a about me

comments are awesome mang

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[ entered in the a freedom writing contest ]

Author's Thoughts
MintyPetals
(train) i forgot to mention this! thanks to luminfics.tumblr.com for recommending this story T T
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naimiestrella #1
Chapter 1: I Have notice that you have the tendency to write really raw feelings of despair and I like it very much being myself in a constant state of hopelessness so yeah... thanks
cbendb #2
This has to be one of my all time favorite XiuHan fics. I haven't been into XiuHan lately, and the first thing I searched when I thought about them was this story. I seriously applaud you, thank you and good job on writing this fic! Hope you're having a good day :)
injeong #3
Chapter 1: Oh...my...god. Ohmygod. Ohmygod.
I have goosebumps *shivers ohmyfreakinggod .... L-Luhan ... Ohmygod ... *pales* I can never see trains in the same way again (don't worry, that was a compliment!! :))
Omg, this fic made me cry ... Its just so powerful in the way its written, and so feeling, its just as good as the published stories I read. Your writing is aboely ... AMAAAAAAAZING, MintyPetals unnie!!!!!! I love it love it love it!!!
Ps. is it too much to ask for you to write an epilouge? Don't worry, I'm fine with it just how it is becuz it is just SO DAMN AWESOME but I wanna see (well ... read but you know ;)) Minseok's reaction ... And maybe other people?
God those parents ... Kicking out of the house like that. HOW COULD YOU DO THAT TO YOUR SON - NOT TO MENTION ITS XI LUHAN!! And whoever called him a "depressed, gay guy" come HERE right NOW so I'll give you A PIECE OF MY MIND. I'll make sure you will regret it forEVERRRRR. *glare at imaginary characters*
omg, this is so heart-breakingly beautiful and sweet ... I'm crying my eyes out now, congrats!!!! You are officially my favourite authornim. Hehehe!
Injeong <33333333
milkyboy_khun #4
Chapter 1: *Sobs* ohmygod ... This is just ... *heartbreak* beautiful ... *sobs*
LUHANNIE NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO WHYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY???!!!!!
Nononononono ... Why did you have to do this is my poor Lulu ... Oh god Minseok is gonna freak ... No chance of an epilouge? Please? I need to see Minseok's reactions ... I kinda hate Xuimin now ... Luhannie nooooooooooo ... TT_TT
*cries* you write so perfectly its annoying but pls don't stop!!!!!! More pweeaseee? *my failed attempts at aegyo are so embarrassing, lol*
woahhhhhhh you are seriously amazing unnie.
Mbk
lytekotem #5
Chapter 1: Ugh, this is depressing... it's ruining my life (in a good way xD) I always read this when I feel sad.
ZeroKun #6
Chapter 1: already told you that i'm crazy so nothing new. This kind of REALLY DEEP AND SAD stories makes me cry girly. oh
infinitaehyung #7
Chapter 1: i feel like everything you write serves to ruin me and stab my heart with a knife thx mom
but yeah this was really good and well-written ;_; ily
artemismmoon #8
Chapter 1: I cry each time I read this story...my heart always hurts with Luhan
17fighting #9
Chapter 1: I beg of you to please write and publish a book. Anything like your previous works because you have too much talent to not get recognition for it. I am in love with your writing and I hope for more in the future. x
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