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clement

DOB ; AGE. 28 DECEMBER 1994 ; 19
FACE CLAIM. JIMIN
BACKUP FACE CLAIM. MARK
GROUP. TORN
APPLICANT. ULTIMXTES
DATE SUBMITTED. 16 MARCH 2014
STATUS. PENDING

Hello Ulti! ouo lol, this is weird because it's my first time reviewing your app since you're always my co-author. but now you're not so muahahhaha. I still have to review you. okay first off, i think this is MY mistake but I wanted to ages below 1994. So you can edit it and put your birthyear below 1994. But I'll just slot you into the 94liner for now. Next, I really have to say that I died at the way he treats his partner. It's so adorable sdafshjdklasd. The personality isn't very detailed though. You wrote that he's handsome and manly... but that's just the physical appearance and not really his personality xD /pats your head.
There isn't much mistakes but his personality is quite short. Like so far, the three positive things I learnt about Clement is that he is cheerful, caring and is a guy with aegyo. Just add a few more traits, like is he good at decision makings? Is he the type who leads or the type who follows? Something like that lol.

adeline

DOB ; AGE. 25 APRIL 1994 ; 19
FACE CLAIM. TIFFANY
BACKUP FACE CLAIM. JESSICA
GROUP. 5STARS
APPLICANT. ZPIXIEANgelz
DATE SUBMITTED. 16 march 2014
STATUS. PENDING

Hey there Pink! Thank you for applying. First off, I feel that Tiffany is a really nice girl. However, she's very much like Tiffany from SNSD and I really don't want to write a story about a character that is like a twin of Tiffany. It's not that I dislike fany or anything but it's too... uncomfortable for me. It's suppose to be an OC character but your character makes me feel like I'm writing about Tiffany. The traits are quite similar but that's fine. I just hope that you can change your character's name so that I feel that I'm not writing about Tiffany (snsd). Next, I can't see your Necklace shuffle. There is a problem with the link/picture so get that fixed. I think the personality is quite detailed so goodjob there ^^ Thank you for changing the neccessary problems! by the way, because the age has to be below 1994, I've put 1994 instead of 1995. I forgot to mention this before x]

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