[CONTENTID1] Turning Page by paipaipai19

Reviewer: babyblueunicorn[/CONTENTID1]

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Our Rubric: 

Tittle: --/5. 

Description --/5. 

Grammar and Spelling --/25.

Font --/5. 

Plot --/30. 

Characters --/20.

Overall enjoyment --/10.

Total: --/100

Grade Score: --

Grading Scale: 

F: 50% or below: we're sorry but it's not a good fic, it needs serious work.

D: 60-69%: okay, but it needs improvement. 

C: 70-79%: solid base for the fic, but problems with the development.

B: 80-89: good fic, enjoyable, with few mistakes in grammar, plot or characters.

A: 90-94%: great fic! Very enjoyable, easy to read and good flow of plot.

A+: 95% and up: Absolutely fantastic, we would recommend! It goes to our Wall of Honor.

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Title: 4/5: 

It fits the story, but it doesn’t reach my full attention, honestly. 

Description 1/5:

I am sorry, but the description didn’t tell me anything nor did it make me want to read more of the story.

Grammar and Spelling 25/25:

Be aware of the past tense. You are writing your story in past tense, but you sometimes put verb