Miracles of December

Description

보이지 않는 널 찾으려고 애쓰다
들리지 않는 널 들으려 애쓰다

An original chobaekho storyline © This story is is fictitious, any relation to any person dead or alive is purely coincidental. This story is original, any form of plagiarism is not welcomed and will be reported.

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Other stories I've written:
Marry U | 꺼져 줄게 잘 살아 | 1432nd ConfessionWhat is Love | Shining Star | Do You Have What it Takes | I Know You | Behind the Mask | Love U More 

♥ xoxo, chobaekho

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Foreword

Three years ago, on Christmas Eve, he proposed to the love of his life. They had been dating for five years ever since high school. Not only that, she was the only girlfriend he ever had. He felt like it was the happiest day of his life when she said, "yes". Unfortunately, his happiness was short lived, as she was gone the next day, Christmas day. He rushed to her apartment but it was already cleared out and returned to the landlord. Her friends and family have not heard from her, including her colleagues from work. Her phone number was no longer available and social networking sites were all deactivated. There was no way of finding her, it was as if she disappeared into air.

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SmileSehun
#1
Chapter 2: Sad story.... *gross sobbing*
farrahkim
#2
Chapter 2: and great. I just let myself to cry out loud. I just had my heart shattered into pieces a week ago due to my relationship with my ex-boyfriend and with this, I lied to myself that this story was sad. it was sad , really , it sways me emotionally. but the thing is. when it reached the end , I caught myself recalling the memories that we had and my tears was everywhere on my face. thankyou for the great story. keep on writing. you have my full support
alize_sakura #3
Chapter 2: this is sad.. why can't you let them to be together? *cries*
sleepingmins
#4
Chapter 2: /sobs uncontrollably/
viweivi
#5
Chapter 2: T_T it's so sad T_T
chodenlovekaixoxo #6
Chapter 2: ohhh god....!! TT____TT

i love it so much ♥ *thumbs up*
babybaozi
#7
Chapter 2: Actually i hope they ending were happy ever after but because the oneshot were inspire by M.I.D it would have sad ending right ^^
dream_keeper88
#8
Chapter 1: Feedback. Grammar is okay. You only have to spell out numbers below ten, like three. The story is supposedly sad and so maybe, showing it rather than telling most of what happened, would give this a more somber tone. Or perhaps the narration could be improved to effectively convey melancholy, grief... and also ending it with Lay. I know it is hard to write a oneshot, it is something I struggle with. We have to compress everything - the conflict, the characterization, past details- without disrupting the flow and yet it comes out rushed. All in all it was okay read. Keep writing. You're getting there.