Author's Note

The Lost Sense

Author’s Note;

This is best read on a circle of flowers, or under the shade of a fig tree. Make connections with the nature, drink a cup of warm coffee, and have a stick in your side. You can also sit on a stool, in front of a window in a view of grassy fields, in an empty room. Be sure to play the classical orchestra version of Miracles in December, so head to iTunes now.

I also want to dedicate this story to the Christmas Day, because everything before that day is such a burden to everyone. Disaster, typhoons, deaths, I could have wished to a genie to make every day an okay day. Let everyone cherish their special time, because it was given to us as a gift. Be thankful and pray for all of the people of the world. I love you, guys.

 

Date written: December 1, 2013

 

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chanbaekghei #1
Chapter 5: I read this before and reread it again. Thank you for this.
kpoplovershines14 #2
Thank you for making me cey every time I read this story. Awwwwwww it was so sad;( very well written though especially the prologue . <3
eldoradoe #3
Chapter 5: OMG I cried ! It's so sad T.T

why Chanyeol, why ? You promised Luhan hmmmm and you left poor Baekhyun..!
This is so sad.. *ugly sobs* I love you author-nim ^^
imSoocute #4
Chapter 5: This is so beautifully written T^T I'm a sobbing mess at the end. Chanyeol wae? waeyo? T^T
Hydrangeas #5
...I have been reading a few lines from you, even your 'Unwrapped' from LiveJournal was witty and beautiful!'♥ SO I WILL BE LISTING SOME GREATNESS FROM THIS STORY WHILE I SOB ALL THE WAY BECAUSE THIS IS *P*E*R*F*E*C*T !!! #


"Baekhyun’s nostrils contracted and his upper lip flinched, fingers drew a cross at the veneer he was leaning on. He listened to a few steps from the person, his hearing detailed at each friction it makes with the floor."

- I could perfectly picture this moment ITS SO REALISTIC and the telephatic-styled movement is PURELY COOOOL; no doubt >:D

"It was a moment before Chanyeol finally noticed that Baekhyun’s hand was already erected in front of him. He gasps and quickly reached for it for a shake. Their skin made contact, and the lines like Yellow Park canyons on their palms filled up each other. The feeling was so electrifying, Chanyeol couldn’t add a second longer. He withdrew his hand and held Baekhyun by the wrist instead, and gently placed back his hand back to his side."

- Very basic and neat moment when the character get stunned by an unexpected appearance of his beautiful admiration. This was really sweet and proper, the detail 'the lines like Yellow Park canyons' was relatable. WONDAFUULL ^♥^

"“Baekhyun is blind—”

The sound of calamity and machines clanking, roads and wheels scratching and smoke heavily breathing distracted the city’s rounded sleep. Everything seemed so vast, yet so occupied. The pace of life was harsh and fast, like turning on a fire to its extremity, burning you into ashes in seconds."

- the sequence between Suho's revelation and the music of the city was really cinematic! I imagined the scene immediately, like someone worded out a secret, then a sudden noise of a loud traffic dramatically covers the echoes of his voice... that thick connection between shock and disturbance was flawless OMG OMG *yyyy*
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