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MUSE!SHINBI by FATIONIST
REVIEWED BY: EUPHORIA--
Title: [09/10]
Since its a prompt story I can't really mark you down for this; but if you changed it, it would catch more reader's attention. Your title is very simple; muse!shinbi wouldn't catch a reader's attention.
Description: [03/05]
I felt like you could have switched the description and foreword; usually, author notes go in the foreword, not the description.
Foreword: [04/05]
Again, you should have switched the description and foreword. However, I loved your foreword.
Language: [10/10]
I couldn't find any mistakes in your grammar, punctuation, and spelling. Good job! It seems like you really spend your time proofreading the chapters.
Characterization: [20/20]
It's not really an actual story, but you characterize your character quite well.
Flow: [17/20]
Again, since its not an actual story, I can't really grade you on this. But based on the chapters, your chapters flow perfectly.
Plot Originality: [18/20]
I haven't really read much stories with the prompts you used, but they just seem really familiar.
Overall Enjoyment: [10/10]
I loved the way you wrote your story. It was seriously enjoyable to read.
Total: [91/100] = 91%
Congrats! Your story made it onto the featured section!
If there are any questions, please pm them to euphoria-- immediately. Thank you and have a nice day.
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