Yesterday Once More

Description

 

Once upon a time there was a boy who loved a girl, and her laughter was a question he wanted to spend his whole life answering.

 

Foreword

Contest entry for Round 4: All or Nothing following the five cards: 

protagonist has a secret, fantasy, “How do you live in fear all the time?”, “I had a weird, empty feeling inside of me. Not a bad sort of empty. It was a sort of lack of sensation, like being in pain for a long time and then suddenly realizing you're not anymore.” - Maggie Stievater, Linger, romance

Credits to King for a Day Graphic Shop for the amazing poster! 

 

I've tried and failed over and over again (and the cycle goes on and on), but here I am, attempting to write yet another fantasy (mixed with my favourite tragedy and angst). It's not really my genre but I'm getting fired up writing this, 'cos it's gonna feature one of my favourite couples - sehun x yoona.

 

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yoonasmile #1
your writing is so good. in love
feeshdaisies #2
Chapter 1: Did i just read perfection or perfection?
afiqahalya #3
Chapter 1: Wow so speechlesh your writing was truely good its awesome how you can write it with a beutiful word
caviar #4
Chapter 1: this is truly amazing. :^)
chaisola #5
Chapter 1: write more please
chaisola #6
Chapter 1: every word and sentence, so beautiful
queeniie #7
Chapter 1: "He realized that it didn't really matter which season it was, because colours were colours, and sometimes, there would be bright yellow in winter and misty white in spring and seasons just can't control that."

"He closed his eyes and continued to in breaths of intoxicated air, with flames and smoke blooming in his lungs and creating magnificent fireworks confined within the intense walls of his organs."

I am so speechless right now, this is just wow. I could quote more sentences but I shall not because it would take forever. This is such a amazing story! You are a brilliant writer!
limyun #8
Chapter 1: This story is beautiful. It's not just your storyline or characters that I loved, but also your writing style and how you describe the feelings so vividly. I could feel Sehun's pain and agony. I wish this was longer but this was really amazing.

I have been reading your contest entries all along and I think you are a very consistent and talented writer. Keep up the good work and good luck for the contest!
YoonHae38 #9
Chapter 1: i love this story and the way you wrote it was beautiful - the way you described everything really well and just everything was amazing <3
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