die to live (and die again).

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Yixing tries to kill himself over and over again while Luhan keeps reminding him that he's already dead.

 

 

Foreword

title: die to live (and die again).

pairing: layhan, minor lukai

genre: drama, angst

length: drabble, 744 words

 

a/n: omfg the deadline is in literally five minutes i can't believe i actually managed to barf out a drabble LOL. 

written for this contest; prompts written at the end of the drabble.

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margo_red #1
Chapter 1: I'm not sure if I'm stupid because I don't understand this at all well I do in some parts but the rest... I don't know anymore. Can you please explain, author? XD
xiaopanduh #2
Chapter 1: I just realized my previous comment makes no sense...at all.

Eh~

But this story. Seriously, man. So good.
xiaopanduh #3
Chapter 1: EurekAA! (I never actually say this wth.)

Anyway...

This is so good. Like, crazy good. Like, super-duper-amazingly-terribly-colossally-overwhelmingly good. Like, like, like, strawberry yogurt drink good. O.O

Wahhhhhboo! (What is with all the strange sound effects I swear I'm more normal than this usually.)

Could I ask for a explanation? OTL I have a tendency to completely miss large themes and concepts.

Thank youuuu :3
wishful #4
Chapter 1: What I love so much about your writing is that you can use these vague stylistics so expressively and beautifully, and it totally stings, because I know that I could never do something like this if I even tried. OTL. The way that you go into the depth of your characters' emotions while only using a minimal amount of adjectives is something that I can never see myself doing (even though it's something that I've always wanted to try) because it seems so difficult to effectively use the rhetoric of pathos without directly stating the emotions of the characters. Instead of directly stating that Luhan is torn by the loss of Yixing and that he'll probably never move on, you /show/ it. I particularly like the way you did that in Kai's section of the story where Luhan is said to have told him that all he ever talks about is Yixing. And then you don't just say that, but rather, you /show/ it to us.

I'm not sure if that makes much sense, but such a stylistic is one that I've always truly admired. It looks really simple at first, but in reality, I think that it goes a lot deeper than many other more descriptive stylistics.

I enjoyed reading this a lot, Tiff. :'3
wishful #5
I told you that you could do it. c;

Can't wait to actually be able to read it, Tiff! I bet that it's great.
thesmartass #6
IS this for a contest? If so, talk about procrastinating.
Tsk, tsk.

Anyways, I'm excited to read your Layhan fic soon!
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