you thought about it, someday.

babel

pairing: hoya/eunji

challenge: write a story that can be read in more than one way.

 

 

 

hey.

 

 

hey.

 

eunji.

 

 

 

 

 

two in the afternoon, clutching the phone like a vice. life source, electric outlet, electrocution if the plug touches water. this is his water. this is his water.

 

pick up, pick up, pick up.

 

 

 

 

 

the phone is ringing. she is waning, five o’clock shadows over a pale bathroom wall, nestling against the tiles. we overstretch sometimes, her fingers ghost over the receiver, he can feel the vibrations of her heartbeat through her arteries, down through her veins and into her fingertips. we overstretch sometimes, to the point of being unable to snap back. this is that point.

 

 

 

 

 

i love you, i love you, i love you, i love you, i love you –

 

beep.

 

 

 

 

 

hoya.

 

please leave a message after the tone.

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Eksoow
#1
Chapter 4: beautiful <3 I finished all of these oneshots and I am in love with your writing. ^^ please do continue to write moreee~ because I will surely read it. :)
pegase2311
#2
Chapter 1: woaaaa can you write about lay&krystal??
Krystalocked
#3
Chapter 3: Wow. It's utterly amazing. Please write about Seohyun :3 I'm really curious about how you describe her.
Krystalocked
#4
Chapter 1: Wow. You always surprise me with amazing writings. Really looking forward for more. I'm thinking about your story everyday, everytime. So many feelings - Happy, Sad, Panic, Emptiness, Fullness, and Satisfaction.
devilgirlmaria
#5
Chapter 4: I haha I read this a long time ago on your LJ hehe <3
devilgirlmaria
#6
Chapter 5: beautiful I've missed you and your writing so much <3
swedenlaundry #7
Chapter 1: F***ING BEAUTIFUL

UR TOO AMAZING
ethereals #8
Chapter 1: I READ THE FIRST AGAIN AND I HATE MYSELF FOR NOT COMMENTING ON THE FIRST TIME
GODDAMMIT THIS IS GREAT
YOU NEED TO WRITE MORE HOYA
personally i prefer hoya/hyemi because hyemi manhandles all manly boys BUT YOU HAVE BBOMB/HYEMI ANYWAYS DONTCHA
I LOB YOU AND THIS IS INCOHERENT BYE
devilgirlmaria
#9
Chapter 4: I read this on LJ and it's GORGEOUS <3
glowbug #10
Chapter 3: SCREAMS S S S. I LOVE YOUR WRITING SO MUCH. to be homest, this is the writing style i strive for - poetic, insightful, and utterly beautiful. please continue updating; i love everything about your work :-)