Milk and Honey, Roses and Thorns

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LuHan had it all.

He was the top of his class, and was the most admired student in the eyes of peers and teachers. He was the one to stay after school and help the struggling kids who couldn't quite get that math problem. 

His family adored him, and gave him anything he wanted, not that he ever asked for anything.

He had many friends and was loved by each and every one of them, and he loved them right back.

He was known as the friendly passerby, always giving a bright smile and a comforting word to everyone he met. 

His family's wealth was impressive. However, it was LuHan was the one to donate to the poor and give to charity.

 

LuHan was the envy along with the twinkle in the public eye. He was the center of attention, and it was this position that he rightfully deserved, much to his objection.

 

Everyone wanted to take a few steps in LuHan's shoes. 

For a day, for a decade...

For a lifetime.

 

Until one day when something happened, so unexpected and so quickly, that it made their heads spin.

 

 

 

 

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Foreword

I need to get this out of my system. I've ben wanting to write a psychological/angst/horror story for a while now, and it's been building up and building up until now I just can't take it anymore.

I wanted to write something that dug into my reader's brains, really made them think about other people and their lives. I know it sounds a bit odd, but... It'll make sense once you read the story, I think.

Inspired by the poem "Richard Cory".

Enjoy~

ArtisticSeoul

 

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gradeA
#1
haha i liked richard cory too
LocketKay
#2
Chapter 1: Oh... Okay.. :(
Nice OS btw!
Philosophies
#3
Chapter 1: THIS WAS AMAZING.

The ending was shocking, but it made so much sense. It's scary how you can never really know what's going on in someone's head, no matter what they look like on the outside.
-mars-
#4
Chapter 1: does he even have a reason to kill himself?
parkchora
#5
Chapter 1: I don't get this story at all. It's beautifully written, but when I read the last sentence, I was very confused. Why did he shot himself?
lonelystar
#6
Chapter 1: I have no words that can express what emotions this story brought to me. It was so beautifully written, and the last sentence literally made me gasp out loud. The concepts of pressure and perfection were brought into play perfectly. Honestly well done; I loved it!
MyHeartIsKimchi
#7
Chapter 1: Oh gosh, I had already read Richard Cory, so I knew what was going to happen, but imagining Luhan doing this made me so sad T.T
mskpd333 #8
Chapter 1: i don't...understand...could you maybe explain?
Mahwiii
#9
Chapter 1: .... This is really great!! >.<