♦ — APPLICANTS — ♦
— [THE LITTLE MERMAIDS] — {APPLY OPEN!!!!}HERE'S THE LIST OF THE APPLICATIONS I'VE RECEIVED. PLEASE MAKE ANY CHANGES ACCORDING TO THE FEEDBACK :3
♦— APPLICANTS FORMAT —♦
username || mermaid name || human name || ulzzang: || age || love interest || persona (aquata, adella, arista, etc.) || O - cleared ? - needs fixing
feedback:
username: kpopcitygirl_ || mermaid name: Daphne Atlantica || human name: Daeun Kim || ulzzang: Baek Sumin || age: 20 || love interest: Kris || persona: Andrina || O
feedback: this is my application so you guys should take a look just in case you need help :)
username: HelloKitty10755 || mermaid name: Miranda Coral || human name: Minji Kim || ulzzang: Lee Eunji || age: 17 || love interest: Chen || persona: Arista || O
feedback: YAYAYY first applicant :) Thank you for applying! So firstly, since you asked, regular scene requests are scene requests that don't necessarily have to do with the whole couple thing. For example, Minji does something and someone gets mad at her or something like that. It's just a normal scene request that doesn't involve the love interest. Anyways, did you copy the source code in? It looks different on your blog post. Also your character needs a Mermaid last name, something ocean/sea/river/water related if possible. Minji's reaction to the human world is definitely cute, but maybe add something more on a bigger scale, not just about legs or buildings. Is she scared about the world, is she afraid that she might die? lolz. Is she anxious, or comfortable in the human world? Those are just some suggestions, but it all depends on you :) Also please check over to make sure you did everythingggg ;) After you fix those things, I'll be able to clear your app~! :)thank you for fixing everything :) I really like the ideas for the regular scenes!! good luck :3
username:LoVeKpOp2 || mermaid name: Starfire ? || human name: Sooyeon Park || ulzzang: Park Sora || age: 17 || love interest: Chen || persona: Alana || O
feedback: Finally got that app down I see :) thank you for applying! Okay so I know you're kinda new to this, but your app needs some work. First, you need a last name. Starfire____? Second, you need a backup ulzzang just incase someone with a different app chooses Sora as her ulzzang and I happen to think it fits that character more. Also, you need parents. Please. The personality section should be at least two paragraphs long not two sentences. The reaction to the human world and the 'is she able to adapt to the human world' part must also be longer, at least one paragraph each. And the style part was directed towards clothes, and how your character dresses. Please fix these things and I'll be able to clear your app~!! :) Thank you for fixing everything!!
username: River_Song || mermaid name: River Current || human name: Ara Moon || ulzzang: Pony || age: 17 || love interest: Kai || persona: Arista || O
feedback: Hi :3 thanks for applying!! I'm really liking your character, she's got the right stuff ;) Thank you for the details and all that it's really helpful :) I keep laughing whenever I read the parts with the grater ><. Her personality is really good, I'm really liking it, though she's kind of similar to my character, but that's fine. Her looks match her personality very well. Oh and to answer your question, the guys do eventually find out that they're mermaids, but that's all I'll tell you ;) Also, for her reaction to the human world, was she scared or afraid of something? Has she ever heard rumors about the human world or the 'bad' things that the humans do? Just a couple things that you might want to add, but besides that your app is all clear! :) Good luck :3 Thank's for fixing everything~!
username:BananaNutt || mermaid name: Atl Sea || human name: Aecha Kim || ulzzang: Kim Seukhye/Hana || age: 16 || love interest: Kai || persona: Adella || ? - needs fixing
feedback: Thanks for applying!! :) Okay first thing, is your character's name ATL or ALT? It keeps switching throughout the application ><. I like her personality but I don't think it really matches with her persona very well, maybe Aquata instead of Adella or maybe even Arista. Usually soft spoken characters aren't the ones who are getting into all sorts of trouble if you know what I mean. Her reaction to the human world is also a little odd, but I like the ideas that you came up with. Maybe fix the 'she only talked to humans if she was curious about something' part, I wanted to go for an either she is afraid or isn't afraid, nothing really in between. Besides that everything is good and I'll be able to clear your app~! :3
username: minwoo_key_fan1 || mermaid name: Serena Cordella || human name: Kim Serin || ulzzang: Do Hweji || age: 17 || love interest: Sehun || persona Adella || ?
feedback: Thank you for applying!! Oh and you can change the picture settings by clicking the lock next to the picture on the settings, just for future reference :) I honestly am a bit iffy about your character, I wasn't exactly going for such a quiet character because I may or may not be able to give her a bigger part in the story. I like how she doesn't like change. Really. THANK YOU for being a character who doesn't like the idea of going up to the water! THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU lol. Besides the fact that your character being too quiet, I think the rest of the app is good! Please fix it if you want and then I'll clear your app :3 Thanks for fixing everything :)
username: writingcrazed || mermaid name: Athena Insula || human name: Jihye Park || ulzzang: Kwon Soojung || age: 19 || love interest: Luhan || persona: Attina || O
feedback: YOUR APPLICATION IS CLEARED. INSTANTLY. IT'S SO CLEAN, SHARP, NEAT, AND SHE'S A GREAT CHARACTER. THAT IS ALL. LOLLLLL But seriously, you're clear and you don't need to fix anything :)
username: tealcloud || mermaid name: Reanna Nerin || human name: Hyorin Choi || ulzzang: Ha Mirae || age: 17 || love interest: Baekhyun || persona: Aquata || O
feedback: Hi!! Thank you for applying :3! It was really quick too haha xD I really like your character and her ulzzang fits perfectly!! Her feelings towards the humans and their world are interesting~! You don't need to fix anything but if you want you could add some more scene requests :) Thank you for applying :3
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