Chapter 8: I really want to read Jessica's pov but sadly it says that the story can only be viewed by members invited by the author

Chapter 14: Beautiful story... I like it... ^^

Chapter 4: Again, I'll read that later. I really hope it's okay if I do, that it's not necessary that I read the other part, not at the moment at least.

Chapter 3: I'm not really sure if I skipped a lot along with the other author's chapter or if it was intended to start this way, I'm a bit confused.

Seeing as this is the second chapter and the length is basically the same as the first, I guess it'll always be this short. It's nothing good or bad since the writing and story are running good like this.

Two little things I noticed are the use of "side" in the sentence "on the other side", the use of "end" is more suited in this context. Also—go ahead and call me a gramma nazi—I need to point out the use of "brb". "Be right back" will make this all look more clean !

As we start reading, we freeze the same as Taeyeon does when the words "I love you" are pronounced, it's a great way to start it. I have to say, Taeyeon's aftershock reaction is quite endearing ! At last, there's something more that we get to learn, Taeyeon has a past with Tiffany and can't say the words back to Jessica... What I'd like to know now is how Jessica came to admit her feelings for Taeyeon. Don't tell me it's because she's been played with all those guys before so now she wants her bestfriend. I have this tiny bit of feeling saying this is rushed, but fortunately Taeyeon is still playing safe.

I'm not really that good with cheesiness so this 1-4-3 thing makes me cringe a bit, but love is love so I guess it's not that bad.

Chapter 2: I'm not reading this now x)

Chapter 1: The story is indeed written using the first point of view just like in the description so the continuity is still here.

The format of the text is good and makes it easy to read as things are well spaced. About the grammar and vocabulary used, it's simple, decent. Nothing extraordinary but considering it's the character who is speaking to us, no judgement can be made on that.

About this chapter, I'd say it has a good pace although it's short. It doesn't delves too much on the feelings, or the past, probably to focus more on what's about to come. Things are hence set quickly and we get the picture easily. The person who is in love with their bestfriend but can't decide to act on it and is hurt when seeing them go. It's pretty cliché so far, the departure at the airport. But things are just getting started so let's just wait and see.

I've noticed some weird sentences however while reading, I think you missed the word "together" when saying "how the two would end up /together/" somewhere and also, there's another sentence which didn't quite make sense to me "Sometimes where I don't know whether I should smile because we are friends, or cry because I know that is what we will ever be."

Lastly, I like this kind of writing. Simple, nice and easy to read. It makes me smile when in stories, two people have such a good relationship since very young, it's hard for me to imagine it can happen in real life haha. But that's what stories are for, to make us dream so I'm not really complaining.

Here I am like I said I would be
I've already read a bit of this story but I'll just do as if I don't know you (for one part) and that I haven't read anything. Starting fresh.

The title makes it seems like there will be a continuity or that it's a remake of another already established story ? It's not a bad title, we can already guess the unsaid words and the struggles between the different people that will be involved in the story, it pulls us in so I'd say it's a good choice.

Reading the really short description, it somewhat clarifies things about what the story will be depicting as we see someone speak in first person about their confusion between friendship and love with a girl.

You can't do wrong with giving so little. But it proves to be efficient, the reader doesn't lose time and already gets to read the story.

TaengSic is a pairing that I affectionate greatly. And everybody knows that things aren't simple with these two so I'm expecting a little bit more of how things will be handled here compared to other pairings' stories.

I have decided to read this starting from Taeyeon's point of view alone at first so that I can really get into her head, as I guess (and hope) that the story will continue being written in first point of view, just like in the description. It's one of the main purpose of using this point of view after all.

Chapter 9: "Tiffany, since you been gone, I can finally breathe for the first time"
Hahahaha best quote ever! TaengSic jjang!:D

Chapter 14: thank you so much for the taengsic story.. love the flufiness

Chapter 13: it is a nice chapter
finally taengsic got together
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