happy endings

the sword had no blood

alice ran trough out the blocks"get away from me!" she screamed as she produced the thorn with her hand and tried to hit right at the spot of this beast."i said get away from me!!!" she tried and she hit the spot."yeah 1 down 60 more to go"well not much of an effort.alice knows the truth of his step father she just has to get to the village and he will no longer be perimitter owner of the gazama clan.she turned left and was surprised to see dead people but she doesn't care much as they were alredy dead."stop running pretty girl"the slimmy handed beast grabbed her robe"you dare touch me!" she shot another thorn and hit right at the spot"2 down"she decided to go back to her brothers war teritorry wich her own has been gone she lost her people but care less for she could stay alive.she stand tall entering the broke teritorry hitting 7 beast at once.alice was doing good with this things until she saw sehun running in blood.

'sehun!"

'alice stay away!"

"no i won't"

"noona don't come near me!"

"sehun"she gave up seing his brother desperately pleeding his step sister not to come any closer.she loves him but forgot to tell

"noona i love you"

"sehun i love you too!"but al at last it was to late sehun had the blue razor blade hit right trough his rib cage.

"you dared kill my brother now feel the pain!"alice shot up from her space and went jumping to the creature while holding out sehun's sword.the perimitter owner won't let that happen so he used his hands to shake her till she lost contact with her own body.while she was at her own world she saw everone she loved she touched her yoo ara.tose moment when they were together until yoo ara was killed with sehun's blade by a serial killer.then came in her parents that died cause of the gazama war at 1658 that killed lots of people then the most handsome person was with her.oh sehun

"alice"

"sehun don't you leave me like this!"

"i already left"

'i can't stand this alone sehun!"

"you can since your not fighting human he is not from this planet!"

he is not from this  planet!

he is not from this planet!

alice tought hard.then who and what is he?then as she tought hard she came back to live and knew what exactly to do she jumped and ripped his skin senselessly with no feelings ripping his rib cage with yoo ara's blade and hitting and stabbing him with the sword and sot him one more stabb in the heart that killed him alice looked around and was relived the war ended.but curiosity killed her soul

where did he came from?

what is he?

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Park_HyeSun #1
Chapter 1: Hmm, so this is a supposedly completed story but I see a prominent cliffhanger.

In all honesty, I think this story has immense potential if you edit it considerably. The idea is there, ^^ Capital letters, spacing, word usage and anything pertaining to those sorts play a big role. I hope you don't feel offend by this, because I only intend to give my frank opinion.

Fight on! Have a nice day.