〈 PARADISE REVIEW SHOP 〉 — closed // hiring

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PARADISE REVIEW
SHOP

 



WELCOME

paradise — a fairly new review shop stilL LEARNING TO IMPROVE; LITERALLY A BABY IN THE REVIEWING WORLD. HERE, WE STRIVE TO DO QUALITY REVIEWS ASAP, TRYING OUR BEST TO PROVIDE USEFUL TIPS AND CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISMS TO ENHANCE YOUR WRITING SKILLS. WE MAY NOT BE THE BEST, BUT WE ALWAYS TRY OUR BEST.

"YOU NEED TO BE HERE FOR IT TO BE PARADISE"
 

 
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RULES — REQUESTERS
RULES — STAFF
 
 
 
02/01/14 — We are currently not accepting any requests until we finish this batch! Please do check on the announcements page!



PS: WE'RE HIRING!

 
01 // No bashing; no rushing.

02 // Subscribing is a must, and please refrain from unsubscribing.

03 // Please credit us and link back to this site after receiving your request.

04 // If you want the review to be done in a certain way, please do tell us!

05 // Please do comment both after requesting and after receiving your request; password is: we are one!; constructive criticisms are gladly welcomed.

 
01 // Before you apply, please bear in mind that quality reviews, good grammar and punctuality are expected.

02 // Further more will be discussed when you are accepted. Read the rule #5 for password. We are in need of staffs, apply away!

This happened before which is why I'm stressing it, but when you apply, be serious and do not quit right away or anything. Be sure to contribute, please, I'm begging you guys.
 

 

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Scarlett

Activeness: 8
Preferred Genres: Romance, friendship
Non-preferred Genres: Heavy

About Me: Hi there, I love anime and K-pop so much. There are a bunch of anime bias that I love like, Levi from Snk, Kise from KnB, Sasuke from Naruto and many others(too many). Instead of bashing and insulting in the reviews, I will give constructive criticism on how you can improve on your story. Actually, I do cringe when I read cliche plots.

Reviewing Style: I tend to look at the plot and characterization of the story most. So, I will have to provide some tips and opinions for them. For the plot, I do look at the plot and the believality. Is the plot believable? However, if you want marks in your review, I am afraid that I can't fulfill this point.

 

Kaji

Activeness: 9
Preferred Genres: Romance, action, violence, adventure, fantasy, supernatural
Non-preferred Genres: Yuri, ,

About Me: I like to read, a loooot. And I write, so you're getting advice from a fellow writer. I like to be bubby but sometimes I can get very gloomy. I tend to get emotional when reading sad stories... And yeah. I'm energetic and loud so be ready for some loud remarks!!!

Reviewing Style: I can be very strict but I also have a soft side so don't worry. I'll always find the good in your story!

 

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Amber

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003 ; how intense! / Togi-Tan / hana / writing...
005 ; first page / APRILGIRL / hana / pending
007 ; when love come / B2utyPinkPanda / Scarlett / finished
008 ; tears of blood / erin_angel2563 / kaji / pending
010 ; the imposter / littlemisshappyify / hana / pending
011 ; six degrees of seperation / dexterous / hana / pending
012 ; oblivious love / krisbaek90 / ??? / pending
014 ; hate / Kareeeeen / amber / pending
015 ; death is underestimated. / ZBabyz / scarlett / writing...
016 ; walk with me / jindeul / cora / finished
 


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graygero #1
Chapter 24: Ok first of all, I need to clear this up. I have been on hiatus on aff since I can't rememeber when. I do subscribe to this shop, but maybe it got buried underneath all the other subscriptions that have been mounting for months. So I'm really sorry I didn't leave an immediate reply to the review. I just read it like just now as in 6.06pm of 30 Sept 2014 haha. See, that's like 10 months difference with the time you posted my story's review. And now that I read it, I appreciate it. I realized my mistakes sometime after I've completed the fic but you pointed out a few stuffs that I couldn't work out on my own. So thank you for that!
ZBabyz #2
Chapter 24: Okay, even if my request isn't finished yet, I'm going to comment.
First of all, take your time guys, don't press yourselves too much; the requesters must know that you all have lives outside of AFF.
Second... well, take good care and be happy guys. I'll support you all in whatever you need (I would help reviewing but I'm bad --;)
Ciao~
jindeul #3
Chapter 20: Title: Walk with Me
Story Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/656447/walk-with-me-angst-horror-romance-exo-sekai-baekyeol
Genre: Horror, Action, Angst, Romance
Harshness: Your choice! Do what you must.
Chapters: 3
Ongoing?: Ongoing
Reasonable due date: No rush.
Preferred reviewer: Whoever's available, although I would really appreciate a thorough reviewer who can focus more on characterization and plot rather than syntax and grammar.
Password: WE ARE ONE!
English: 2nd
Comment: Like I mentioned above, I'm not particularly on the search for an extremely long review listing my grammatical errors. I would really appreciate it if you could fix a few if you find them, but my main priority is character development and plot since I am aiming to improve in those areas first. Thanks!
itsjustnana #4
Chapter 19: Thank you for the review!
There were things I was unsatisfied with in the one-shot and I'm glad you pointed them out. I'll work better on incorporating the titles with the stories and the plot itself the next time. Thank you again ^^
Kareeeeen #5
Title: Hate
Story Link: https://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/645755/hate-gdyb-jiyong-supernatural-taeyang-monster
Genre: , supernatural
Harshness: 8
Chapters: 5 as of now (I'll be posting chapter 6 in an hour or so ouo)
Ongoing?: yes
Reasonable due date: one week, maybe 2 weeks?
Preferred reviewer: Iloveyoubaek
Password: we are one!
English: native speaker
Comments: My friend who I requested to review my fics is taking a while, so I wanted to get my first few chapters reviewed xD
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