It's Gonna be Better

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Jong In fell in love with Kyung Soo when the man flushed down the fish Jong In gave him in the toilet, Jong In fell in love with Kyung Soo when he was limping from blister one day, Jong In fell in love with Kyung Soo when they drank coffee in the coffee shop together and even after a long time, Jong In kept falling in love with Kyung Soo each day. He sees the world in colours, in shades, in shapes. Kyung Soo sees the world in black and white. They just want things to get better. 

Foreword

 

 

 

 

OMG ANOTHER KAISOO FROM MEEEEE......!!!

Well, to be fair --this is a birthday fic for a dear friend, misslolly, who never fails to entertain each of my randomness even at the wee hours. so dear unicornfreak, happy not-so birthday! 

This fic was initially written as a one-shot, however due to its long length, I cut it up into 3 parts, also serves as a countdown to misslolly's birthday which is going to be in 9 days. AKA 1 chapter uploaded in every 3 days XD

full chapter 1 will be uploaded in a few hours because I only have few hours to sleep before class ZZzzzzzzzzzzzz

OTL

Until then.

-bluecoins

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02taty #1
Chapter 3: hahahahahahaaaaaaaa... the elevator !!! XD
nindyasnast #2
This is like my third time here or smth and I was dumb enough to not upvote this back then. Believe it or not but i screenshot some parts of this fic (is it just my habit or other readers do it too, idk) like when they were in the elevator and that part where Kyungsoo said "I want you. I want us". That exact part got my feels blown to the air and when Kyungsoo asked Jongin to marry him. Damn my kaisoo feels hv blown to anoher galaxy i swear.
orangemuscey #3
This story deserves so much more recognition... nah actually all of your stories do. I've only read 3 of them (the Kaisoo ones) so far, but they are so lovely. It's kinda impossible not to enjoy them, really. I've read a lot of FF but this is probably the first time where I notice about what a difference a right pace can make. I've read stories where the main ideas were amazing, but it was a bit too rushed. Or when the story was filled in beautiful and all those metaphorical words, but things were moving waaaay to slow for my liking. Or there were too much dramas going on that the story lost its pace.

But yours was just right. I found myself enjoying each moment of KaiSoo's relationship, laughing out loud during the abrupt elevator moment, feeling giddy when Kyungsoo's insecurity was laid down on the table... and you didn't lose your timing even though you're going back to the past to and so forth. Instead, they all just helped building up the emotions and tension. Overall, it's really heart-warming and nice. I'm a fan : )
luhan001 #4
Chapter 2: why not pwc? hahaha
Onepenny #5
Chapter 3: Your stories are just beautiful.
threecheers #6
Chapter 3: I am officially a fan of your writing. The peeing-in-a-bottle elevator thing faking made my day. Oh my God. Srsly. And it's such a nice way how you lay down the development of their relationship. Fast, concised yet heartfelt. I see their personalities, I love their minds. Jongin's optimism and dread, Kyungsoo's insecurities and will. And OF COURSE IT'S AN EASY ANSWER. Kaisoo is Kaisoo and FFFUUUU, gehd, the ending is just the perfect way of wrapping up the uncertainties. I mean, their love is there and you know, you really made it look like it will work. And. And. Kyungsoo was the one who proposed. /dies
Thank you. Imma go dash to the spin-off, now it's Hunhan's turn to freaking make it work.
Have a good swim in your pool of awesomeness, bud. Spend the day flipping your hair or something, coz YOU ARE COOL. Ayt.
beo1211 #7
Chapter 3: Willst du bis der Tod euch scheidet
Treu ihr sein für alle Tage
Nein, nein
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Hey hey hey, wat was that mean??!
misslolly #8
Chapter 4: OMG SEQUEL???????? :O
Krisyeolsdaughter #9
Chapter 4: KAISOO <3 the ending was awesome <3 <3<3
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