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Jinki never thought he’d fall in love again, not for any woman or man. Well, he was wrong on both accounts.

 

 

Foreword

Getting this one back up. Fun Fact: I gt inspired by this when watching some jgv - slash one of the scenes in here is based off that o. Please do subscribe again if you read this via CAP_Loves_Niel -- that account got banned, so this is my new / other account ^^" 

Warning: of approx 15 years.

Princess_Minho
Appa Issues: I plan to update this soon >.< sorry for the wait~

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Eyagibba
#1
Chapter 2: I WANT MOREEEE *sPARTA'S VOICE*
SNSDandMBLAQ #2
Chapter 2: Update!
Lol im so weird like 7 years later reading this
ixButterfly
#3
Chapter 2: QQQ
I bet Tae is staring to have a crush on Onew, maybe.
Cause other than having your friend dating your mother, why would he run away from the restaurant? @.@ Hmmmm
Jessii #4
Chapter 1: Jinri and jinki? 0-0 I'm so curious Yeah... so please update soon ^_^
onyuuu #5
Chapter 2: 2 comments in one day woop, but Taemin and Minho? o.o woah
WAIT JINKI AND TAEMIN'S MOM WHAT OMFG PLOT TWIST JUST RIP MY HEART OUT WHY DON'T YOU. omfg i did not expect that nope nope nope, wow, i'm eager to see how everything changes ijodisihdo i'm excited, update soon <3
onyuuu #6
Chapter 1: wow you're writing still is really great! I've fallen in love.

One criticism though, your sentences are a bit clumped up, space them out a bit more, like double space^^ it'll make everything clearer!

Secondly, have you ever written in third person? I think you would be fabulous writing it gah. Ilu (I have a thing for 3rd person stories idk i'm weird)

but I love bullied!Taemin fics, he's just so cute and small and <3 <3 <3 and i love the , call me a freak, but i love it when Jinki is like 8+ older than Taemin /shot *cough*e*cough*
I can't wait to read the next chapter /sobs
Erowindangle #7
Chapter 1: I'm so subscribing!
Chaera_Bomzy #8
Based on a 'o'? I would love to watch it. PM me the link, alright? ;)
ixButterfly
#9
Omfg of 15 years? wow o-o.
Oh well then, I can manage, hopefully ~