Lights! Camera! Break-Up

When Idols Break up
*Eunji's POV* "APink! You guys are next! HURRY UP!!!" Aish... I just cant believe it. Finally after 4years of intensive training, Im debuting. But why am I so nervous???? I breathe in and out continuously I had to calm myself down... As we walk towards the entrance to the stage, my members were bowing to the group that just performed. I couldnt be bothered who the group was because I was just too nervous. But all of a sudden, when I lifted my head up,my eyes connected with a pair of eyes thats was so unfamiliar yet I felt a sense of connection. WAIT WHAT IS HE DOING HERE?! *LJoe's POV* "Great Job guys!" That was a relief! After training for so long, we finally performed our hearts out and we enjoyed ourself! Just when I was about to joke around with my group members. The next group who was performing were coming in.. They were really pretty. As I lifted my head up after bowing, My eyes connected with the prettiest eyes ever seen. So hey guys this is my first ever fanfic. I hopw u can give me advices?:)
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Limonium #1
Chapter 1: Separate the characters pov..then it'll be perfect..can't wait for the next chap..update soon..
snabilah50 #2
Chapter 1: It ok..kust separate the pov and the author note. .it is good..it make me feel nervous and want to know more about the story. .anyway. .update soon k. .
blueaoichan
#3
Chapter 1: I think it's better if you put it in several paragraph
It's kinda hard to read it this way. ><