Chapter 1: Uhm. I'll just confess this honestly okay? This isn't the Ryeowook I know - usually I don't think he's the type of person who likes to avoid things. I'm not saying your portrait is not correct, it's just that I don't feel exactly the Ryeowook you described. I mean, I saw him having his own 'health book' thing, and he speaks wisdom sometimes, and he looks up every site possible about Super Junior - whatever praises or bashes he may come across. Yeah, I think you probably get how I feel now (sorry I somewhat am stubborn with the way the writers pictured Ryeowook)
Beside from that, Kyuhyun's the mighty as usual, the storyline is great (I am actually continuing to read the sequels), and the flow is smooth too. I can't complain about how you had written it, it's just Ryeowook that bothers me. But of course if Ryeowook wasn't the type you had described we probably wouldn't have this amazing story.
Thanks for the work author-ssi.
Chapter 1: Wawwwwwwwwwwwwww!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!, and suddenly K's eyes are staring at R, muhahhahaaa, I bet K was as surprised as R with that kiss, that he could just staring him. I can perfectly picture that scene, they looking each other at same intensity and surprise, jejejejeje.
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