Desolate Melodies

Description

Myungsoo sees all the bad things. Suzy sees all the good in the bad that he sees.

 

He struggles, but she doesn't relent

– not until cracks of light begin to shine through his dark melodies

and break his self-inflicted chains.

 

Foreword

{

Because not everything that is bad, is bad.

Because even white can look gray when you're in a dark place.

Because if that's what you believe, then that's what will happen.

}

 

 

An entry to TSITL Round 3 Subround 3 (:

 

"I like beautiful melodies telling me terrible things." - Tom Waits

 

-- Review by Gotta Catch 'Em All Review Shop

 


A/N: Beware of looong one-shot ahead. (I guess there are longer ones though? MS word says it's 8394 words ._.)

I didn't expect myself to write Myungzy again so soon, but the idea just came and yeah. Heh. ^^ Maybe I should just call myself a Myungzy shipper already ._. Yeah, I should.

By the way, it may seem like it, but I didn't mean to interpret the prompt literally. (And don't worry, I didn't.)

And this is kinda out of topic, but I have a serious problem with re-sizing my story posters. T.T

 

/eek my AN is so incoherent.

 

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Kpop_addict
#1
Chapter 1: This is so cute and touching ♡
Gazeru
#2
Chapter 1: I like the idea of people seeing the future. :D This is very nice. And yes, this oneshot is indeed long but you managed to make me read it to the end because it's interesting ^.^
I was bored for a while so I decided to read your story again. keke. Thanks for the story~
thekeytodestiny #3
Chapter 1: Aww... This is actually pretty sweet and encouraging! It's light and friendshippy, but with a tint of romance. It's not too cheesy or fluffy, in fact it's just right. It also taught us thy we should always accept people for who they are and also respect their privacy.

It's really well written, I love how you portrayed Suzy and Myungsoo from being strangers to friends. Premonition is a very interesting ability, but not all people like it. Th same goes for mind reading, sometimes it feels like you are invading people's privacy.

Sorry, if my review is kind of long. Once again, great job on this!
peachheart
#4
Chapter 1: Such a long one-shot...that's mean I like it! I really do love it. You're a genius. Never crossed my mind that I will read this kind of amazing story <3
Everything is perfect. The way you write and expressing it. It just hard to explain agqywdkaiq! Thank you and do write more myungzy story in the future :)
farabigail #5
Chapter 1: aaahhh.... i really really love it <3
sequel??
its just.. perfect!!
SkullMaki
#6
Chapter 1: *O* The BEST fanfic EVER !! <3 The BEST PLOT EVER and the BEST COUPLE EVER <3