Monday

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What they breathed in was Monday air. From him to the skies, the distance was infinity. There were indefinable things in this world, and there were those they could both make up. He was, like many things, unpredictable. (To the boy of the summer skies, the love that never was; I write to you from a million miles away.)

 

monday
(Sungjong, Hyesoo (OC), Hoya; friendship, non-AU; PG)

 

 

This is an entry for The Sky is the Limit: March Madness Subround 3
(I know it's unlike me to do anything on time asjhasdkjahj)
prompt;
'Each night I lie down in a graveyard of memories. Moonlight spins a shroud around me.'
Jerry Spinelli, Love, Stargirl

 

This is also Divvy's,
Because write a Sungjong story, she said;
And because she's an amazing writer and her MyungYa is sob-worthy.
I will not mention your LHyun you are purposely trolling with that
Her prompt was;
'My name is Sungong'
Like what kind of prompt is that.

 

 

 

Foreword

We didn’t give a proper goodbye. Much later it became a habit – one of us would click the phone off and the other would be left hanging on a line. I didn’t know what this boy did, what he did after I ended our conversation, but I myself stared at the phone for a ridiculously long time, wondering if something different could’ve happened in our conversation.

 

 

A/N:

Uhh; for now just deal with my crappy edits DIVVY I'M PROMISED A POSTER; but this will be the first het thing I've done in awhile. There's nothing much to say about this but do u know how hard it is to find an appropriate sungjong storyline divvy this was a killer I almost died This will take awhile and it's mostly just mindless rambling; but I'll finish this over other things because deadline. Infinite will appear within conversation and stories, but nothing more.

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Smileonce133 #1
Chapter 7: :'( goodbye?
ethereals #2
This is beautiful. I mean it. The way how.. empty, yet full Hyesoo is, is reminding me somehow of me. It's really beautiful. It's nice to see the relationship of HyeYa and HyeJong, and how it developed, and the way Howon talked about Infinite - or the splatters of Infinite. It was indeed, well, it sounded like Hoya himself, haha. It's plain, and it's depressing, and the horrible thing probably is - Hyesoo is like a blank paper, which is written full with nice things that hurt.
Gosh, probably I interpret too much. But it rocketed to Number Two from my favourite fanfics from you.
cb-itssowindy #3
Chapter 7: This ended... The fact that it's ended is trying to sink into my brain, but I can't. This story is so realistic, and it not only revolves around romance, but the friendship behind the romance. I find that it makes the reader wonder a lot. Especially the language you use for the dialogue. It just makes me feel all fluffy and up in the clouds. I love that you added the part where Hyesoo wonders about her future. I'm still very young, but I'm already stressing about taking courses that will benefit my future, but the issue is that I don't know what I want to do in the future. So when you included that I just felt that I wasn't alone and a lot of other people go through the same phase. Thanks for writing such an inspiring and wonderful story.
ErisChaotica #4
Oh, and I could definitely relate to Hyesoo in certain ways. I feel like my priorities are off-kilter, and I don't really know what I want from life. Sadly, I have direction but not really purpose. What is my dream? Existential crisis kind of stuff.
ErisChaotica #5
It's nice to find a story about friendship among all the romance. I think in the process of fangirling over our idols and semi-crushing on them (or maybe just being hormonal and feelsy in general as adolescents), we forget the value of friendship, pure and simple (or maybe not so simple). There was no real fluff in this story, and yet the Howon and Sungjong's interactions with Hyesoo were no less endearing. Maybe I'm just very impressionable though.

Anyway, even if I am kind of a er for happy endings, I definitely appreciate realistic ones, even if they're painful. I guess maybe I should say that I like endings that fit, and this one did. Reading this makes me feel like a superficial person who writes mindless fluff. *sigh*
greasy-couple #6
Chapter 7: its so hard so say goodbye to people, but hyesoo was so mature and brave to accept their goodbyes, she was honest with herself that by cutting ties she saves herself any further dissapointment and expectations from both parties. the last chapter hurt alot, but i guess that was what i really liked about this fic, how you didnt make some miracle happen so she could stay friends with them. it was realistic. yet she still did something most of us cant do, which is to let go. and i really enjoyed it thank you C:
falliblefantasy #7
Chapter 7: This story is too good, I swear. I don't know, something about this entire thing just got to me. When I'm on a chapter, I just get hooked. Perhaps it's how I can somewhat relate to many things said that had me feeling for Hyesoo... I'm at a loss for words now; sorry.
Anyhow, I love this story to bits and if I could upvote this a hundred times I swear I would <3
falliblefantasy #8
Chapter 6: I read the first half with a somewhat heavy heart seeing how you looked into two pretty intense topics, if I must describe them as such.
"Maybe they just don't want to be lonely." I relate so much to this it shocks me. It's a guilt trip to the times I've done stupid, petty things for that very reason.
And then that next bit, "there were things people didn't need to see to protect others" - it got me wondering how far we'd actually go for those close to us. I wonder really, would I do just as Hyesoo did, knowing the things she knew. I believe Howon intended for her to see it, since he could have destroyed it himself, isn't it?
With Sungjong, everything seems lighter yet complex in its own way. It's sweet though :)
cb-itssowindy #9
Chapter 5: "Are you happy?"
"Yes."
"That's enough then."
I love this moment right here <3
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