Why...did you leave? [Incomplete one-shot]

Why...

                   

                 The sound of my cell phone's ring woke me up. I smiled, remembering last night. All though it slowly faded when I felt the other part of my bed empty. I quickly sat up, forgetting about my phone, and started to worry. Jinki, where was Jinki? I got a pair of boxer shorts and went to look for him. Was he in the kitchen? I went to go look. Nope. Was he in the living room? I checked there too. Still no Jinki. How about the bathroom? I quickly ran to the bathroom and gently knocked on the door. No answer. 

 

                    Tears started to form in my eyes. Did he finally leave me? I shook my head violently. No he wouldn't he loves me. He wouldn't dare leave me. Then why isn't he hear, in my arms? The tears started to fall. I love you wasn't enough for you to stay? 

 

                     I went back to the livingroom and sat down on the couch. I scanned the coffee table for anything Jinki related. Then I spotted it, a note? I began to read it.

 

                                                 Dear Minho,

                                                                           I just can't do this anymore, I'm so tired of being used by you, the pain is so unbearable that I sometimes want to die. I love you. I love you so much that I'd do anything to make you happy. You say you love me but I just don't see it. You flirt with other men and even sometimes women. I know I shouldn't mind but I do. I can't help but wonder if  you cheat on me. i reaally do love you but I just don't know what to do anymore. I don't want to force you to stay but I don't want you to leave either. I don't want to feel distance between us when you say I want all of you. I'm sorry Minho, I can't be with you any longer.

                                     

                                                                                      Lee Jinki

 

                             

 

I know you guys were expecting more. There was supposed to be more but I couldn't think of anything so I left it like this. I'm so sorry ):

The only way this could be finished is if I get a co-author. So if anyone wants to become my co-author and come up with an ending, message me!!! 

 

                                

 

                               

 

 

 

 

 

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Sweetlikeposion
#1
Chapter 1: Omfg, love it every time i read it its sobeautiful cant help it >.<
nabeki #2
Chapter 1: Continue this please,it's so good
MiyuLisis #3
Chapter 1: Ohhh soo good maybe you can put a POV of Jinki so whe can know why he think Minho is cheating, and we can judge if Jinki is being a drama queen or is Minho the bad one n_n
jacex1DxSHINee
#4
Chapter 1: Hi!!! Sorry for not commenting on Don't but I just found this fic and I figured I just do one big comment :)
I love your idea and both Don't and this one shot are beautifully written. I've never posted anything before but I'd definitely be wiling to finish off this fic if you want. Do you want me to send you something I'm working on so that you can judge my writing?
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