Beings from the Exosolar planets

Description

The 12 elements that made up a planet in the exosolar system has been thought of as a myth. There never was a planet that harbored 12 elements. But, not many people know about the outer planets that are past our solar system. The ones that are too far for our eyes to see and are still out of reach of our telescopes. For thousands of years, people have been looking at the sky wanting to know more about where we came from and what might still be out there. Many theorists believe that the planets are stars were created by the Big Bang, while others believe that the hand of God was the one that created the planets and stars. Infact, no one really knows. Just because it says in the Bible about God making the planets and stars doesn't mean it really happened. There is no right or wrong answer in the creation of the universe.

But, the creation will finally be revealed when Earth is hit by a meteor that once belonged to an exosolar planet that was ripped to shreds by a Black Hole. The meteor contained something that is very valuable. The 12 elements of that once habitable planet that now had met its fate with the Black Hole. Was it just bad luck that the planet was too close to the Black Hole, or was it something else that caused the death of that planet and the release of the 12 elements?

 

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For many years, Earth has been visited by spaceships from another world. There are accounts of people in the time of Jesus and after reporting about seeing strange objects in the sky and thinking it was God trying to tell them what they needed to know. Many were afraid for their lives. Wall carvings show accounts of strange beings with odd shaped heads, no mouths, big eyes and either green or gray skin. Many believe that the beings were part of the destruction of mankind. People have read the accounts and took note of when and where the spaceships have been seen and many times the spaceships would visit the same place over and over again. People were told to never interact with the strange beings but some people are just too curious and soon, those poor souls are taken and never seen again. Soon, people started to fear the strange beings and have thought of having war against them for what they've done to the people of Earth.

But, this time, Earth is being visited by a different kind of being. A being that looks, acts and breaths like us. They come from a planet that is past our solar system. A planet that once was a thriving planet with lush grass and beautiful water. But, either bad luck or none at all, the planet came too close to a Black Hole and was destroyed just as the beings left on their spaceship. They were looking for a place to land and found their way to Earth. The beings that emerged are 6 beings that resemble humans, except that one of them is an Android.

What is the reason they've come to Earth? Was is because of the death of their planet, or is it something else?

 

Aliens from the EXO planet are:

Xiumin

Luhan

Kris

Suho

Lay

Baekhyun

Chen

Chanyeol

D.O

Tao

Kai

Sehun

 

Aliens from the other EXO planet are:

Yongguk

Himchan

Daehyun

Youngjae

Jongup

Zelo (Android)

Foreword

Hey everyone, this is Raven here. I know I've mentioned before that I wouldn't make another story while writing my current one: Porcelain. But, last night as I was watching the tv show: Firefly, a thought came into my head. So, I decided to write a story involving 2 groups that I just started getting into. I wonder if you can figure out which 2 groups I'm talking about when you read the description. It shouldn't be too hard to figure out. Of course I'm not going to forget my current story: Porcelain, it's just that this one came into my head and I wanted to write down the description while it was still fresh in my head. Now, I may end up changing it around, but so far what I've posted in the description is what you'll see in the story. I have the 1st chapter written, but I need to reread it and make any necessary changes before I post it. But, I hope that you'll be patient and wait for me to update. I do have to work and when I'm not busy, I'll try and update both this one and Porcelain. And as I've mentioned in Porcelain, I'm not someone who likes to write . I don't mind reading it, just not one to write it. So, don't expect that my story is going to consist of it. There may be times where it might get a rating because of something, but that's up to me to decide whether I should write it.

So, comment and let me know what you think of this by just reading the description. I'm eager to see how many people are going to wait for the story.

 

Thanks again for taking the time to read this and wait for the 1st chapter.

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Completed Stories:

Porcelain: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/234989/

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Stories in Progress:

My Immortal: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/763708/

The New Pretender: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/704670/

Sapphire Eyes: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/576474/

 

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FrenchHyerin #1
Chapter 11: So... For today...
Well, the fact tat Zelo is afraid of the EXO members, I knew it would be like that but, I have to say, where did the children and Dongsun go? They're are hiding in another room are something like that? Yeah, probably.
For professor Lee, I Wonder what he will do in the future... I am notr sure what to think about him... Maybe he is trustful but... I don't really trust him for the moment.
For Kris being an assassin... He succeeds to resists to one syringe but not the second... For that, it kind of prooves that his body is being more resistant to the serum...
And, the fact that Kris is now inconscious made me Wonder how he will be when he will Wake up... I mean, will he be back or not? And there were hunters with him right? They are waiting for him?
And for Tao? Is he staying with Kangdae? I Wonder what will happened to Tao too...
Finlally for Jongup and Zelo... I hope everything will go well for them... I'm kind of worried since Jongup is quite alone now since Zelo is shut down... I hope they won't meet any hunters...
And for the other BAP members... I Wonder where they are... Did they left? Or maybe they are hiding somewhere... I don't know...
So, that's it for my comment!
I'm waiting for your next chapter :)
FrenchHyerin #2
Chapter 10: Hi~~
The fact that Luhan is using his telepathy skill is quite interesting! That is a very good idea! But, I can't wait for the moment when the EXO members will meet the BAP members... Like I said in my previous comment.
I find it nice that the BAP members are with the kids, to see how they live and all of that. Himchan seems quite interesting about it as well.
For Zelo, I'm glad that Sooyoung is staying close to him and is trying to cheer him up. He really needs it! And... Because of that... I Wonder if Sooyoung will become an even more important character in the future? Maybe...
For Hana, well I actually Wonder where she was and well, she pops up from now where. xD And, well, I wonder when she will met Yongguk... Because, if I remember well, she had heard from Kangdae about Yongguk right? So I wonder what will happen...
About professor Lee, I think he will accept to help Yongguk but I still wonder what will be his reaction when he will learn that Zelo is an android so, not really Junhong.
For Kris and the serum... Well, I think it will not be as effective as on Tao since he already had it in the past right? So... Maybe he will be strong enough to resist against it...? And for Tao, I think that he is trying to resist, like when he heard Kris calling him. His heart is coming back but his mind is stil block...
And, he now have Kris's pendant... And I wonder what will happen when he will take it back to Kris...
So that's it!
Can't wait for your next chapter!
Amazing like always! :)
FrenchHyerin #3
Chapter 9: Hey!~
So, for this chapter,Tao has brought Kris to Kangdae. And I can't help but being worried about him... Tao still doesn't listen to him and Kangdae with his syringe... Probably he will try to make Kris an assassin again since he was one of his best assassin? Or... He will torture him... Not sure about it... But, what I can say is that Kris is really of it... He surely had it a lot of times in the past... Can't wait to read the next chapter to learn more about it!~
I'm glad that Zelo is awake! But, I can't help but Wonder how he will be when he will, eventually, met the EXO members...
I mean, the EXO members are trying to get back Kris and want the help of the BAP member and, they think Tao and Zelo are still friends... But... I don't know if the BAP members will really help. Tao is the one who hurts Zelo that bad but they are also in debt towards the EXO members who help them to get back Zelo... So... I'm not sure about what will happened in the next chapter.
For Sehun et Luhan... Well, Luhan will, maybe, try to contact the BAP members by telepathy...? But I'm not sure either.
With Dongsun's story, we learn that all the children that he is taking care of had a really tough life... And, I'm sure Dongsun will succeed to be friend with Yongguk.
So, well that's it.
I'm waiting for your next update, bye~
FrenchHyerin #4
Chapter 8: (Gosh, can't believe that I am writing too much for one comment! XD I will continue here!~)

Zelo will be probably happy to be back... But... He will be also scared right? I mean. Right now, Tao is like his worst nightmare and... I can't help but think that he will also be afraid of the other EXO members...
So... I Wonder what will happen...
Good luck for your next chapter! I'm waiting for it!
Have a nice day!~
FrenchHyerin #5
Chapter 8: I couldn't comment earlier but I'm finally here!~
So, about this chapter,Zelo's flashbacks were quite interesting. We understand more how he feels. And, well, the fact that he can feels all this kind of feelings is amazing. I mean we understand how Zelo can pass so easily for a human. Nobody would suspects that he is android (except if they see his blood of course)
About Tao hurting so much Zelo... I don't know what to say... I mean, I knew it would be like this but still... I would have prefer if Tao didn't do it... But... That would have been too easy right? And, well, Tao didn't destroy Zelo completely. That's already a good point.
About Kandgae having a heart... After what I have read since the beginning of this story, I don't believe it at all sorry. I mean, He could have keep him and, after a few years, he could have learned how to fix him and make Zelo a hunter? Well. That's only what I think.
The fact that Tao has been given again some serum prooves that Kangdae needs to pu regularly some serum in Tao. Probably because Tao is too strong? Or something like that. And when Tao brought back Kris. Well, I knew it would be that easy. I mean, Tao just had to stop time and since Kris don't have any power for the moment... But I hope the EXO members will be able to do something since, at that moment, I think Tao's power is quite the most powerful. The best would be that one of them would be able to taken it off. But, even if one of them succeed. I doubt that Tao won't fight in return... And if he does the the same things that he did to Zelo... But maybe the EXO members would be able to control him enough time for him to coming back (not being Under Kangdae's control with the serum I mean)
For the BAP members meeting Sooyoung and Dongsun, that was a good idea! It was nice to see them back. I'm glad that Zelo met them because they are really helpful.
And I can't wait when Yongguk will have finish to fix Zelo. I Wonder how he will react when he will be awaken?
FrenchHyerin #6
Chapter 7: Hi!~ It's me again for my daily comment~
So I was kind of glad that you put in this chapter how Yongguk made Zelo! It was really interesting! And the fact that he did a few more androids before he succeeds to make Zelo prooves that he really want to make him.
It was also interesting to know how Yongguk met the other B.A.P members.
Will you do the same for Kris and the EXO members, well that would be longer since for there are 11 members but maybe it would be interesting?
Also, I find that it is also a good idea to have the point of view of the B.A.P members. Good luck in that!~
For Zelo and Tao... Well, I was sure that it would be like that... I hope Zelo will find a way to knocked out Zelo without killing him. And also, about Kangdae taking Tao's pendant... Maybe that kinda mean that Kris and Kangdae will met soon (well all the EXO members and the BAP members since there are all together). Can't wait to see Kris wait they will met Under these circunstances (if it happened of course)
I also Wonder what would be Kris's reaction when he will know that Tao became a hunter... Kangdae won't be alive for a long time...
Between; the serum that Tao has in his body, it have to be put again every day or somethinf like that? So... Maybe some time later he will be back... Or maybe the fight with Zelo will make him weak and the serum won't be as effective? (Yeah I know, I'm really imaginative on this~)
Finally, for the fact that Youngjae knows why Kris hates Yongguk, I Wonder what he will do with this information... Probably keeping it to him and wait to be sure that it is true? Maybe he will ask Yongguk about that? But I don't think that he will tell this members to the BAP members for the moment...
So that's it for my comment!
Can't wait for your next update!~
FrenchHyerin #7
Chapter 6: So... ( My comment will be probably a bit shorter than the others since I have to go to university and I think I will be a bit late ><" But I need to comment now! :p)
Well, I understand that you didn't put how Yongguk made Zelo in this chapter, it probably wouldn't have fit in this chapter which have a lot of things being said. Like the fact of Yongguk being to the BAP members.
The fact that Zelo and Tao got captures king of disturbed me because, Tao could have stop the time right? Or maybe he didn't have his pendant so he couldn't do it? For Zelo, well, he was obviously to weak for the moment so it's quite logical. But, I Wonder what deal Kandgae want to make with Zelo...
For Tao and the serum... It is probably the serum that Kangdae told about to Yongguk that would make do whatever he want? Not sure about that though.
And, well, that's quite obvious that Kris won't be happy... Can't to see his reaction.
And, for the EXO members, I'm glad that have forgiven Kris that easily. It prooves that they are reallt close.
So that's it!
Can't wait for your next update, good luck!~
FrenchHyerin #8
Chapter 5: To begin this comment, I have to say that you don't have to be thankful to me ^^ I usually don't find this kind of fanfiction (I mean as descriptive as this one)and I am really glad that I have found it!~ And also, it really have an amazing and complicated story! I love your ideas! You're an amazing writer!
So... I can't help to feel so bad about Yongguk... The flashback from his past was quite... Impressive... And completely painful... How Junhong died was... Horrible. That's the word. But with that, we can better understand why Yongguk made Zelo a look alike of Junhong.
And, I can't help but feel relieved that the BAP members succeed to free Yongguk. But it is obvious that Yongguk will probably some mental problem after what happened. Can't wait to read that in the next chapter!
For Hana... Ammm... I still don't know what to think about her... She had her baby but she probably won't have him eternally... The baby will be given to a family like the others right...?
About Kris's secret being revealed. Well, it had to be said after all. And the reactions of the other EXO members are quite logical also. Whereas Zelo's reaction was quite... Unexpected. Like when he has been "turned off". I really Wonder what happened to him! Personally, I don't think he was overload of killing the woman or the knowledge of what Kris was... But... Maybe something else? I mean, maybe (just maybe) he felt something about Yongguk being in pain or something like that...? (Yeah, I am really imaginative I know but... Why not?)
You might show how Zelo was puting together using Junghong likeness?? That would be totally interesting!!
And I Wonder how the EXO members will be dealing with Kris and Zelo in the next chapter.
Good luck for your next chapter!
I'm waiting for it!~
FrenchHyerin #9
Chapter 4: Amazing chapter! Like the 3 others!~
So it was mostly about Yongguk I think. The fact that he made Zelo to looked like Junhong made me think that he (of course) really missed his brother and he couldn't let him go. So he made Zelo. And his younger sister, Hana... I don't really know what to think about her honestly... I don't think she is bad because of the way she is. Probably she is manipulated by Kangdae ans she does't know what happened to Junhong and to Yongguk...? And she probably doesn't that Yongguk is in this house. (Like Yongguk who doesn't know that Hana is there too)
On Zelo's side, I would have never thought that he would have accepted to be turned off... I mean Kris is there so... I wouldn't have done it if I were him, I would have been to afraid to be destroy when I would have been turned off... But Zelo really trusts Tao so I think it's okay. Besides, Kris has punched him the next day so... Kris probably wanted to warn Zelo to not do something bad...
Besides, I can't wait to see the B.A.P members enter the basement to find Yongguk! And, after that they will probably make Yongguk listen to the conversation which was on the device... And... He will probably easily identify that the girl who is talking is her sister! (Or maybe he will met her before? I don't know).
For the EXO members, welle, we didn't saw them that much in this chapter so I don't have a thing to say about them ^^"
So that's for my comment!~
And I can't wait for your next update! ;)
FrenchHyerin #10
Chapter 3: Hi!~
Your story is seriously amazing! I totally love it!~~
It is really descriptive and it is something that we don't always found on fanfics here :)
So far, this story is really interesting! It begins very fast and we don't have to wait some chapters for the story to takes place.
For Yongguk, I think he will be probably tortured to say where is Zelo and the others but he will surely say anything.
Between Zelo and Kris... It will be probably be very complicated... I think Kris will obviously try to destroy the android to make Yongguk to pay for what he did in the past for Hyuna and his child. But Tao seems to be quite close to Zelo and Kris dosen't want to hurt him... But Hyuna and his child are probably more important to him I think so... Big problem in perspective? ><"
Well update soon! I can't wait for it! :)