More Than Invisible

Description

“Though I’m transparent, I’m standing in front of you. Your eyes just look over me.” – Blind by Trax

Foreword

Hello again! skyblaze208 here.

So this is my sixth and final BAP contest entry oneshot (for now, at least, muahaha). It's either Daehyun or Youngjae; take a guess! :D

This oneshot is for Marriage Recipe [Writing Contest | Win KPOP Merchandise!]

My prompt:

“Though I’m transparent, I’m standing in front of you. Your eyes just look over me.” – Blind by Trax

Thanks and enjoy! :D

EDIT 1/27/13: Previously titled "Less Than Invisible" until I finally realized that it should be "more than" in order to have the meaning I want. xD

EDIT 4/1/13: New cover! Actually made it a while ago but kept forgetting to change it. LOLZ.

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purplecupcakes #1
Chapter 3: I love this story so much I reread it all the time <3
Fotiadini #2
Chapter 3: Cute cute cute again XD
shapphire #3
Chapter 3: *happy tears*
Bravo! Bravo!! The confession though, it's like spinning, making uncertain lines (what am I talking about?)
Good luck on your stories~ Recently I like Youngjae, I don't call him Youngjae but Youngchai~ >///<
shapphire #4
Chapter 2: My eyes watering
I can't endure this kind of huge pain
shapphire #5
Chapter 1: Rereading because I give an upvote!
When Youngjae reminding her about possibility of being caught cheating, that's harsh man~
When Youngjae said, "I'm her friend," Youngjae~ I'm not okay! When he confessed he didn't need love, don't say that ever again Youngjae! When he said he is okay eventhough her wife calling him as Jongup, I'm not okay~ I want to cry~ (; _ ;)
shapphire #6
Chapter 3: Yeah, I really enjoy this! Same like you, Author-nim~ ^-^ It felt you're rushing things but, I understand this is only one-shot or three-shots actually. But I really really enjoy this! And I've just realized Youngjae always cuts off Eun Ae's words!! XD Omona~ That's why there's misunderstanding between them. If Youngjae wanted to hear what she wanted to say but he was afraid if Jongup came up. In the end, Youngjae who always comes with Jongup - -a
Thank you for the story and sorry for the long comments, keep writing and supporting B. A. P *\(^0^)/*
Hwaiting~! p(^u^)q
shapphire #7
Chapter 2: I want to cry Author-nim, I want to cry~! (; _ ;) My heart is hurt bearing Youngjae's pain!! (what??!)
Aaaahh~~ DX
shapphire #8
Chapter 1: Poor Youngjae~ My heart sunk bit by bit at his last sentences~! Evenmore when Eun Ae said Jong-- Urgh! How could you? DX
I like the story~! ^-^ Author's note isn't annoying, that's how author communicated with readers besides through story ^u^
yaminohime #9
Chapter 3: what an ending! daebak!
yaminohime #10
Chapter 2: ANIYA! NO! I KENAT!
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