Inadequacy

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Description

Because Tao can never help but feel inadequate around the one he loves most of all.

Foreword

this is an angst story! i like angst so i have high hopes for this story! yay for exclaimation points!

written and received an honorable mention for The Désespoir Writing Contest, prompt 3:

I don’t have the right to be near you… don’t love me.

Rated PG-13 for language, depressing themes, etc

PLAGIARISM IS FORBIDDEN. ACTION WILL BE TAKEN IF THIS HAPPENS.

I do not own EXO, only this piece of writing. This piece is strictly fictitious.

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momokawaii23 #1
Chapter 3: I cried
upsilon #2
Chapter 3: It's late, but I don't care
I MUST SEE AN EPILOGUE TO THIS!!!!!!!!
unfixed-soul #3
Chapter 3: Omg epilogue? Please?
KpopLuver29 #4
Chapter 3: No! Please don't leave off like that!! So sad!
99618894 #5
Chapter 3: OH MY GODDD
right when Yifan got the letter I started crying T.T
I had a feel of what was gonna happen and it happened T.T
epilogue pleaseeee I wanna know how the members and Yifan react T.T
Telissa #6
Chapter 3: EPILOGUE PLEASE? ;A;
darknessinmyeyes #7
Chapter 3: Do a seqeulplease! I really love this story but I want to see how the members (especially Kris) will react ^^ Its a really good story <3
banditsolace #8
Chapter 3: an epilogue would be really nice. :)
totayelnsuerngd #9
Chapter 3: My gosh... this was just so beautifully written. Angst can either be amazing or just horrible and this was definitely the first^^ It brought a pang to my emotionless heart~ Hehe I won't make you, but I really would love to see a part about Kris's thoughts about Tao's death (But you don't need to because the ending is perfect the way it is) But I would enjoy reading it if you did. I definitely look forward to reading more of your stories in the future~
huangjangeun #10
Chapter 3: I vote for epilogue!!! (T_T)
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