Chapter 1: This is cute :3

Chapter 1: awww this is so cute

Chapter 1: While I silently raugh at your author's note at the bottom, I'm also grinning like an idiot because I usually want to punch fluff in the face, but I didn't want to punch /your/ fluff in the face.

Do you feel me?

The structuring of the fic was organized /wondrously/. The way that you portrayed Joohyun as someone that likes to always be on schedule fit the wording and organization of the fic perfectly. Though the story was told in third-person limited (towards Yoona's character), the structuring allowed a sense of Joohyun's being to be embedded into the structuring as well, which is pretty cool. I'm not sure if you did that on purpose or not, but kudos to you.

The gradual development of their relationship is something that I find utterly adorable. It also makes me question why I don't indulge myself in fluff more often. I probably should--I think it would make me less sadistic in my own stories. LOL.

Overall, this was a truly endearing story. I have no doubts that you'll be able to pull something even better than this in the future as you continue to grow as a writer. And I'll definitely be looking forward to it.

(I also thing that Jongin is the cutest ing thing ever, and I expect some elementary school fluffy kaistal from you asap, thank you very much.)

Chapter 1: Nice one-shot author-nim.
I like hoe Yoong innocently likes Hyun here.
The planned and impromtu people....two opposite but they stand best with each other. Their opposite traits fills each others' flaws that make them perfect together!

A nice YoonHyun one shot indeed! thanks author-nim!

Chapter 1: The one-shot was really entertaining to read; cute and fluffy, just like the maknaes themselves ^^ The whole setting and plot was so realistic to the point that I swore I did the same things when I had a crush on someone lol. Yoona was just priceless in the story and they way Joohyun just knew how Yoona would guide her and how they'll guide each other was sweet. They compliment each other perfectly. Great work ^^

Chapter 1: The story is pretty good i watched the video million times already i love it so much you put my biases in this story i liked it even thought it's short

This is love<3
So sweet, how Yoona goes out of her way everyday just ti say hi. :) Seohyun too, cute in my eyes for the exactness of everyday. This is too endearing, I smiled goofily atthe end. :) Thanks author for this!

im looking forward for it :)