Feeling (Falling)

Description

‘You’re dragging snow in!’ Sungjong halfheartedly chastised.  It wasn’t like she’d actually hear him, though there was a vague sense of satisfaction when Chunhee glanced behind her, noted the melting puddle, and cursed as she hastily kicked off her boots.  He watched her grab the broom by the doorway and begin to sweep the remaining ice out the door, muttering under her breath, and chuckled when she nearly slipped.

Chunhee’s head snapped up.  She blinked at her surroundings in surprise before she caught sight of him.

And promptly screamed.
 

Foreword

Written as my entry for xitslisax3luv4yen, and Nara1214's The Sky Is The Limit || Writing Contest - Round 2, Subround 1.

Contest prompt: 5. When I die, don't come near my body, because my hand may not be able to wipe your tears anymore. -From Tumblr

Alternate universe - setting inspired by some mélange of Disney's interpretations of Pinocchio and The Little Mermaid—there are no mermaids though.

 

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thecookiethief #1
Chapter 10: This is an amazing story. The descriptions were really good and the way you explained without writing everything out made me guess and stuff. The ending was omg. I had to reread it a few times before I omged again. And the suspense was aaamaazzinng. I also love the title of each chapter and the title of this story. The ending also had a mini horror thing there which blew me away. Its great how the plot isn't cliche- with Sungjong falling in love with Chunhee and stuff. This is such a beautiful story ;__________; Thank you for this amazing thing ;__________;
kintoun
#2
Chapter 10: this was a good read ; u ;
it ended with a... sad ending i suppose? c:
you broke off from the usual boy mannequin falls in lovewith a girl and went with the opposite so it is not cliched and i really loved it /sobs
i can picture creepy meanie sunggyu in my mind :<
i feel sad :c
thanks for the story though! C:
shahirashera
#3
Chapter 10: Wow.. the end is quite a twist. She gave her body parts to him? Does what Sunggyu mean by finding his true love.. gosh.. she loves him didnt she? She's willing to sacrifice for his sake :(
ThebabyELF #4
Chapter 10: Nice story, I like it ^^
ThebabyELF #5
This seems nice, I'll be waiting for you to update it ^^