The Flower of Death

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"This just in, another victim has fallen into the hands of "The White Lily". The White Lily is a group that has been wanted by police for a long time for a series of murders. Just today, police found the body of Song Hyojin by the banks of the Han River and by her body was a bloodied lily, the mark of The White Lily. Police are still investigating the crime scene and warn everyone to stay indoors after dark. If traveling, sta-"

The girl turned off the TV and threw the remote on the table. She leaned back on the couch and sighed. The sound of the doorbell got her up on her feet. She answered the door but no one was there. She looked down and saw a bouquet of lilies.

Foreword

Hi~ Pipoomica here with another EXO story OTL

I got inspired to write this after I wrote my story The Slasher and Come Back.

Credit to Navi_7769 for my lovely poster and background! Check out her graphics shop --> Walker's Graphic

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The Girl:

Yong Bora is a 20 year old girl who is majoring in medicine in college. She is a sophomore in Seoul University and is usually ranked in the top 30 students.

She lives by herself in an apartment her parents bought for her as a congratulation gift. She works as a cashier in a book store near her apartment.

Bora is a bright girl who is very friendly but can be blunt at times. She's very outgoing as well and pretty popular on campus. She also loves listening to K-Indie and her phone is full of it.

The White Lily:

A group of 12 handsome young men who are wanted by the police. They don't kill for fun. They have a reason for it.

Suho and Kris: The leaders of the operation

Xiumin and Luhan: The talented snipers

Tao: The martial artist

Kai and Sehun: Fist fighters

Baekhyun: Expert hacker

Chanyeol and Chen: Weapon suppliers

D.O and Lay: Spies who keep on eye on their target

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Hope this story is interesting to you guys! I probably won't update it often because of my other stories unless I'm itching to write a chapter.

Check out edited version here: The Flower of Death 2.0

Photos and gifs are not mine! Credit to those who made them

Please don't plagiarize this story! If it's similar to any other story you've read before, it is a pure coincidence.

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readeranon #1
Chapter 10: my bet is on kris.
ChoiHyemin #2
Chapter 36: Your story is amazing... I like the assassin, Mafia, gang kind of story. But I think you will not continue this story anymore.... doesn't it?

I hope you will update soon in Flower Death 2.0

Thanks a lot for making a beautiful story
Lolypop123 #3
Chapter 36: Oo theres the new version :o
hanah2212 #4
Chapter 35: Can you just make another version for edited one ? T.T i just want to read this until its complete without being edited. Yes, at first, it sounded weird when she doesn't freak out much about her death. She supposed to do anything that she wants before she die but i have been spending hours to finish read all chapters until you decide to make some editing. I just love this story like it already has been. But still, i will read again if you want to edit this. Sorry, im making nonsense comment T.T
kpop_angel44 #5
Chapter 34: When I saw that this story had an update, I was overjoyed! I absolutely love this story and despite not being completely realistic, (since after all, it is just fiction) it was engaging, interesting, and absolutely something that I had enjoyed a lot. During the period of time where there was no updates, I went back and reread it many times, and regardless of how many times I have read the story, I feel as if it is amazing as it is. Sure, there is no such thing as perfect, you could even go to a published book and even with multiple staff working hard (editors, publishers, etc.) there are still many errors. So don't be too hard on yourself!

Also, I wish you all the best! I really enjoy this story of yours but I understand that the first year of college is extremely difficult for many (including myself), I am actually in university right now, so I understand where you are at right now, and I give you my best! I support you and all your decisions about this story (I hope you don't find this weird since we don't know each other hehe) I just wanted to give my personal feedback/opinion. Anyways, thank you for the update author-nim! and FIGHTING!!!
-exolover- #6
Chapter 11: I started reading it and I thought that it will be very interesting. But their reactions are kind of strange. She got the note which told her that she has 12 days to live but instead of telling someone, or the police she goes to school and work? If I was in her place I'd at least spend my last days doing something interesting, or run away. Then she goes to their house and she is suddenly very close with the people who wanted to kill her? Even if they become friendly later on in the story, I think that there should be at least 2-3 chapters in which she is afraid of them and they are anything but friendly towards her. She was told that either she helps them or she dies but she just says "I'm not doing this and don't you dare kill me". And now Kris, who has never apologized, says "sorry" to her when she is the one who breaks the rules? I think that he shouldn't have appologized or felt guilty. I don't think I'll continue reading the story because of that. Sorry.
BananasForJae #7
Chapter 36: Woooooooooohhh ready for your updates!
Congrats again on getting in to St. John's!
JunhoMahletY #8
Chapter 36: Lmao i meant authornim not campus...where did i even got the campus word??!!
JunhoMahletY #9
Chapter 36: u r back campus!!!i love this story of yours and i would be more than glad to wait for it in another note congratulation on gettin into your planned college and i wish you best till your return fighting !!!
pandaraffe #10
Chapter 36: Congrats on getting into your number one university! thanks for this story and ill be waiting for your update!
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