Sick Of It

Description

"You think you're so cool, just because you're a big idol?"
"You think you're better than us, eh? Don't you?"
"Think this'll get you popular?"
Taemin hid his face away in his arms as he felt rocks and bits of food being thrown at him from every direction, knowing there was a swarming crowd filming it all on their shiny phones.
He could feel the hot tears building up in his eyes.
Don't cry for them. They aren't worth it.
"Loser."
"Idiot."
"Pathetic."
"Gay."
"Nobody likes you."
Nobody likes me.
My hyungs like me.

"You're a useless idiot."
Maybe I should just die.
"Get out of here, gay boy!"
He felt a strong pair of arms push him off his seat and send him crashing to the hard concrete.
That was it for him.
The small brunette boy stumbled to his feet, his head drooping low, and ran out of the school gates, the sound of everyone's laughter echoing in his mind.

Foreword

So...this is my first fic, I guess.
I really wanted it to be one of my more important and...worked-on-harder? fics, but I guess I just had to let my feelings out somehow.
I don't know how you found this but...please do read it, even though it's kinda depressing.
All comments and subs are this much appreciated: ASDFGHJKL;' OMG I LOVE YOU SO MUCH RHEWBFIWBIGFERGASDIS
Please be nice as I am new here and have absolutely no idea how to work this website.

Thanks to everybody who does end up reading this ^o^

WARNING 31/3/14: I WROTE THIS WHEN I WAS LIKE TWELVE I STRONGLY RECOMMEND CLICKING AWAY AND NEVER RETURNING

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milkyboy_khun
#1
Chapter 1: Stop saying to click away
whatever that means
you wrote this when you were 12 wow. Taeminnie ... T_T those bullies are meanies don't listen to them
I was hoping for 2min but like, I don't mind. I prefer this kind of fic ... Awwmygod Tae is sooooooooooooo cute!!!!! "I love you hyungs" love it love it love it LOVE IT SO MUCH!!!!!
Must be a bit unexpected for his hyungs but yayyy
go away bullies nobody likes you *pouts* so cute, more pweeaseee?
*hopeful eyes*
mbk
yellowlight_4
#2
Chapter 1: Wow you wrote this when you were twelve? Then I wonder how much you've improved now!
If I tell you my honest thoughts, I would say it was pretty good ^^ Taemin's feelings were portrayed quite realistically, but I have to say the ending was kind of rushed. It seemed like he was getting over his struggle a bit too quickly. But considering this is a one-shot.... then never mind. heh.
I'll stop talking now, I probably sound like some nagging old lady xD
Good job nonetheless!~ ^^b
Baebaegopa #3
Chapter 1: This is so beautiful. Like seriously... Damn this was great. Age doesn't even matter cause it was much better than half the stories I've seen by 'adults'. This was quality. Mwah
ailee_exo
#4
Chapter 1: OKAY SO I JUST READ THIS AND OMFG. YOU WERE EVEN AMAZING AT WRITING AT TWELVE YEARS OLD OMFG IM LIKE AN OLD LADY WITH BACK PAIN AND BAD EYESIGHT AND I STILL CANT WRITE AS GOOD AS THIS. YOU BE THE QUEEN SINCE BIRTH, MAN I BET YOU WERE WRITING UP TOP QUALITY NOVELS AS A FETUS. YOU ARE AMAZING AND BLESS YOUR SOUL BCUZ YOU GIVE ME LIFE, AND HOPE, AND FREEDOM, AND POWER, okay I'm kinda really hyper right now I'm sorry BUT I LOVE YOU AND MAY YOU HAVE A GREAT LIFE.
DragonTopsThePanda
#5
Chapter 1: BBY ;AAAAA;
Spirit_Queen24
#6
Chapter 1: Cute ending!^^
lannisters
#7
Chapter 1: This is pretty good. c:
GOOD JOB HOHOHOHOHOHOHO
AND IT'S A HAPPY ENDING
EVEN BETTER OWOOWRIERIOWEIOWRUEWOIR
justnormalme #8
Chapter 1: This is a pretty awesome fic even though you're new here. ^^
Great writing!
thestrangelittlegirl #9
Chapter 1: so you're a newbie. well, welcome to AFF! this fic was beautifully written, with the change in Taemin's emotions and thoughts very smooth and developed. :)