Chapter 1: Ahhhh I love this world u craeted. I want to know soo much. How.. how could u stop there? I love ur writing style its amazingly vivid. Ur charcters are amazing too. I'm in love.

Chapter 1: okay sooo kyu was in a mental hosp rite? n hyukkie saved him from there rite?? can u do a sequel please??? i wana noe wht is hyukkie to him??? i feel a little hanged on now...like im at the edge of a clif...

Chapter 1: This is really very well write it and explains the unknown emotions slowly as Kyuhyun is feeling them, also, it makes me wonders several thing about love but I love the fact that the colors in Kyuhyun life are because Hyukjae, and for some reason it remembers me a movie I watched before, but its not like your story, yours is sweet, calm and has warm feeling with love, the one I watched was a world without any emotion or thoughts and it had action and it was sci-fi.

Oh! But I just spaced out, what I want to say -forget about the movie, please - is that this is one story that I had enjoyed the most even if its short, and I read this later than you post it, so you are not at hospital anymore, but I just want to tell you to take care of yourself, I really care for you even if we just know by AFF and it will pain me if you're feeling sick or bad, so please, look first for you and don't stress.

With love: me!!! ;D

Chapter 1: woah...this is...woah...beautiful...
you made me feel like what kyuhyun's feel, living in a grey world. such a relief there's someone with many colors looking for him.
i don't usually like a story like this (is this called fantasy? semi-fantasy? outside our daily life, i mean) but i like it...so calming...
uh eri, just how many story that i counted as this-is-not-my-style but you make me like it, or even love it? hehe...

oh are you in a hospital? well i hope you'll get better soon ^^
thanks for sharing ^^

Chapter 1: wowowow XD thanks for sharing this! :3 at first i thought it feels like reading catching fire or sumthin. hehehehe man with many colors. so cool! :) get well soon!

Chapter 1: Really Sweet<3<3<3! Why were you in the hospital¿? I hopoe that you ´re aright...

Chapter 1: it's sweet T^T

what's wrong?? are you okay. i hope so ^^ get well soon author-nim :D

Chapter 1: Long time not reading your story, why you're in hospital, Erii-shi? Could i call you that? ._. Get well really soon! :D

Chapter 1: err???why this is rated as m??was it because of the kiss??
haha....AFF is being so strict lately~
anyway,,,don't you think this one needs a sequel??
or maybe it's better this one...
let the reader wanders with their own fantasy...hehehe
anyway,,why are you in hospital??

Chapter 1: eri why are you in the hospital?? what happen?? are you okay?? hope your feeling better now and get well soon neh..

are you seriously only planning on making this a one-shot because OMG!!! I love it!! full of mystery which makes it even more interesting to read and find out more.. I want to ask for more but before that I'd like you to get better first.. take care Eri.. thank you for this story update ^^