Imprints -Tattooed In My Dreams-

Description

He knows he's different from many. He sees things that very few can see.
But in addition to that, ever since he moved from his native country of South Korea, he hears a voice calling him, a melody.
And he feels compelled to follow.
Out to the sea.

 

Foreword

Title: Imprints -Tattooed In My Dreams-
Pairing: Myungsoo/Sungyeol
Rated: PG-13
Genre: Supernatural, Slight Romance
Comment: For the Infinitized Writing Contest
...I suppose I'll be putting up a couple of my stories on hiatus. Sorry, guys ._.  
I've been trying to put together some thoughts I had for this story and I have to say, I don't know if it's fitting for the contest x_x

 

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ilovesungyeollie
#1
Chapter 6: Owww interesting~
YEOLLIEZEL
#2
Chapter 6: it's a cute story but i bet myungsoo's mom and woohyun will mourn due to his death. but myungyeol's together and happy ending despite the little sad part. A definite one of a kind story. ;)
minsoph74
#3
Chapter 6: huh, interesting and unique plot I enjoyed reading this
procrastperfection
#4
Chapter 6: Myungsoo died... His mom will be completely heartbroken
On a brighter note WooGyu hooks up and I bet Sungyeol is a hot merrow.
Really good job. I love this kind of fantasy/folklore writing
Ero-chibi
#5
Chapter 2: Wow. Just bloody wow. This chapter is really good. It has the element of mystery (1st part), playfulness (woohyun and myungsoo), and drama (the death of the girl and Myungsoo's self-burden). I hope it gets better and better. If you are writing this for that contest. I'm pretty sure you undoubtedly have great chances to bag what you want.

Myungsoo and Woohyun's friendship is damn awesome.

If i am to rate this as of now based on my screwed up biased- criteria. It'd be Writing Style- 29%, Story- 29%, Myungsoo's Character- 38% = 96%. it means Perfect. Now if only the Myungyeol relationship relationship roles would fit my taste. It's a make it or break it factor. ^^
Ero-chibi
#6
Chapter 1: Wow. Did you write this chapter? If so, i tell you, you got a knack for writing interesting children's book. It was nicely written, simple yet really captivating.