Angel in a Foul Mood

Description

Baekhyun feels fed up with the world, and most of all, himself, and locks himself up in his bedroom, refusing to let anyone in to comfort him. Chanyeol doesn't give up though, and helps Baekyeol cheer up, and unlock the door again, by singing a song outside the door, until Baekyeol caves in, and allows him to enter the room once more.

 

Hey all, this is my first oneshot that I'm writing, so I'm not really sure if it'll be any good... I actually study english literature, and my forte is writing really, long descriptive pieces, so I hope this will turn out fineee *crosses fingers and toes*... I was actually supposed to work on the next chappie of my other fanfic, Mission Impossible II, but I had too much homework, and I figured a oneshot would take less time to figure out...so...

I was listening to the radio, and EXO-K's song, Angel, otherwise known as Into Your World was playing. I really enjoyed the song, and it gave me some inspiration for this fanfic. I wasn't really a fan of EXO before I heard this song, and checked it out, but I'm glad I did, and I hope this story lives up to the awesome songgg *fangirls*... I'll try to make this as fluffy and entertaining as possible xD

 

Characters: Some brief moments with other EXO-K members, but this story mainly focuses on Baekyeol <33333

I really, really, really hope you guys enjoy reading thisss *bites fingernails*...

 

Foreword

  Baekhyun grunted a little, as he fell face-forward onto the floor, for what seemed like the hundredth time that day.

  Baekhyun flung his arms out, so he was stretched out at full length, and just lay there, aching. He was glad that the lights in the dance studio were off, except for the first row of bulbs on the ceiling which cast long shadows in the dim room. He was glad that there was nobody left to see him in this state.

  He did not see the shadow that returned, and stood in the gloom, to keep him company.

  Today's dance practice hadn't been so gruelling: their manager had wanted to give the tired boys a small breather, and they were allowed to take their time to learn the new dance moves slowly. They had been relieved for the almost-break, and they were determined to work as hard as possible on the new dance, so that they wouldn't disappoint the fans.

  So why wasn't his body doing what he wanted it to?

  Baekhyun would have gotten up and punched the wall, if he'd had the energy to. He really needed something to vent his anger on. Well--it wasn't so much anger, as it was exasperation at himself. It was quickly turning into hatred for his body.

  Baekhyun lay there, letting each pant that tore out of his lungs make him bob up and down a little on the wood floor. He looked down at the curving, brown patterns that marred the otherwise honey-brown slats of wood, and how they came nearer, then went away again, nearer, further, a lulling rhythm. It did nothing to soothe him, and only one boy, who'd bothered to stay back, watching quietly in the mirror, noticed. Chanyeol lay down on his tummy too, to get a better look at Baehyun's face, shielded partly with shadow, as he faced the ground. Chanyeol wanted to know if Baehyun was alright, if he needed a hand to get back up again, or if he needed a hug to cheer up.

  Chanyeol frowned, because Baekhyun was frowning, and Chanyeol hated it when the boy was upset.

Do comment, and tell me what you thinkkkk!! It's my first try at oneshots, so please givemegivemegiveme feedbackkk <3333

 

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Just something cute I found off the net <3333

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shipallthepeople
#1
Chapter 1: Awww this was way too cute. Way to stuff so many emotions in such a succinct fashion! Very impressive.

(Also, I noticed that in your description, it says "Baekyeol feels fed up with the world..." -- Is that supposed to read "Baekhyun feels fed up..."? Sorry if it isn't; I just wanted to let you know if it was. If this offends you in any way, please accept my deepest apologies!)
ally-chan #2
Chapter 1: ahhhhhhh^^
cuteness overload!!!
:D
KEYshinee-MyLove
#3
Chapter 1: wow... this is really gooooood
u should make this into a long baekyeol story
i kno its a one-shot, but u could a story following these lines
its GOOD
perforatededges
#4
Chapter 1: *short!
perforatededges
#5
Chapter 1: I love this so much! I have only one complaint... It's too sort, even for a oneshot!!!
CrushedT90
#6
Chapter 1: well I just became a baekyeol shipper lol
dububrit-on
#7
Chapter 1: This was really sweet ^^
Your writing conveyed the emotions of the the characters nicely. I enjoyed reading it.
13aholic #8
Chapter 1: it's amazing, truly beautiful. i was expecting at least a peck on the cheek, but never mind, this is good enough. the peck/kiss part will be somewhere in the near future for them, so yep, this is a great ending :) it's well-written and everything flows so perfectly. i love how Baekhyun is disappointed in himself because he feels like he lets the members down. and i love how Chanyeol seems like he can never get his eyes off Baekhyun, he's always watching Baekhyun and taking care of him, making sure that Baekhyun is alright :) that's so sweet.

thank you for a cute story :)
dohana
#9
sound interesting
please update soon :)