Frozen

Description

 

When going home from work, Jonghyun found a freezing teenager boy near an abandoned alley. He just couldn't leave him there, but the boy was already on the brink of death. Jonghyun had done anything he was able to, but he couldn't save the boy. 

(alternative version for Almost Frozen)

Foreword

AN: Well yeah.. This is my first oneshot also my first tragedy after a very long time.. I am still writing Almost Frozen but last night this 'what if' thing just came into my mind. 

So yep, I suggest you read Almost Frozen before reading this since some of the story will be the same.. But it's not too necessary xD So yeah I hope you'll enjoy this oneshot.. I really do :3


Eh, I'll only write a bit about the characters since only Kibum and Jonghyun will appear, plus their background won't be too important.. 

So yeah xD

Kim Jonghyun 

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A hardworking, wealthy man who grew up with a caring family.

Kim Kibum

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An abandoned boy who doesn't even know who his parents are. He had been living on the streets for most of his life. 

'Foreword':

 

I was walking home one day. It was freezing out here. Even though I was dressed warmly, I was shivering lightly as a cold wind started to blow. The sky was cloudy, the snow was going to fall soon..'Great..' I thought. I quickened my pace,I wanted to get home before it got any colder, or the snow started to fall. I cursed inwardly for not taking my car that morning. I should have known that it was going to be this cold. I passed an abandoned alley, an eerie feeling overcoming my senses instantly. These places were where many of the crimes happened. But, something made me stop.. I took a few steps back, as I looked inside of the alley. I noticed a small heap of rags on the cold pavement. And a body underneath them. It wasn't moving at all. I stood there for almost a minute, staring at the motionless body with shock in my eyes. And then, I stepped to it, I just couldn't leave them there..

 

 

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DingKey
#1
Chapter 1: Why is this a oneshot? Wht not two shot? Three? Chaptered? Aish....
GardenOfDestruction #2
Chapter 1: Oh god ;__; my heart... so sad ;_;
Kasumichan
#3
Chapter 1: Waaahh I don't like this version D'X kibummie can't die. No. //sobs forever
asianswagg
#4
Chapter 1: I have three words. I'm still crying *tear tear*
PepeMon
#5
Chapter 1: T-T NO HE DIDN'T DIE!! DON'T LIE! NO HE WENT INTO SLUMBER, NUUUUU .....
Jongkey-Forever
#6
Oh! How could you make me cry?
I cry hard after reading this..
plz don't make me cry again
plz don't make my angle die again
kpop-angel
#7
I cried :'( it was soo good and sad at the same time :')
BabyLocket
#8
Omo! so sad yet so sweet! you have succeded in making me cry (which is very rare!) are you happy now!?!?! but really it was a beautiful piece! well done, ppyong!
heme-sanloveminho #9
I knew he was going to die i saw it coming and was prepared for it and I still ended up crying my eyes out.
sssonia #10
*writing (gross spelling mistake)