When The Death Is Near

Description

Somehow you can't remember a thing. You wake up, noticing that you're in your way to your mother's hometown. The unease atmosphere around make you feel more uncomfortable.

 

Are we going to mom’s hometown, dad?” You ask, breaking the silence that’s been to long inside the car.

 

Things starts to get weirder when your grandmother begins to attacks you without any reason that you could think of. She's not the person that you used to know anymore. More unexplainable stuffs keep on coming to you. With your dad not talking to you and your grandmother can't seem to stop attacking you, you figure out that you should find someone for help. Then he's there... Someone who is familliar but you don't know who he is... A surprising truth yet to be unfold. About you and him and yourlife...

 

 

 

Who could he be?

Why does weird things happen to you?

What is it the reason behind all of that?

 

 

 

 

 

 

Foreword

Hi there~ Don't forget to subscribe and leave a comment you ... This is just a short story. I dreamt about it and decided to write it down. Oh and this is also the first time I try to write a mystery story. I'm really sorry if it's not good enough :) Thank you!!

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meryljill
#1
Chapter 5: wow... that was unexpected... love it!!!!
meryljill
#2
Chapter 2: what's wrong with my grandmother????
Gracia1301
#3
Chapter 5: can you do a sequel pleaseeeee pretty please><
authentic22 #4
Chapter 5: Wahhh..
She's really dead owo
Poor tao :(
he's so in love with her XD, he can't forget her~
authentic22 #5
Chapter 4: It's getting clearer and clearer~
OwO
authentic22 #6
Chapter 2: Now i kinda understand who she is.. But why's her so-called-grandmother attacking her?
Hehehee , move to next chappie~
authentic22 #7
Chapter 1: Uwooh, why's she forgetting things??
Im excited to see what's next XD
Kkk~
lovelyme23 #8
Chapter 5: One thing that I regret the most is reading the comments before actually reading the whole story T.T I shouldn't have done that. But I really like the story. It doesn't give me a horror feeling but it does thrill me. Which means I'm satisfied. But I was kinda expecting the ending was Tao finally letting her go in peace and she saw a light. You know, that light to heaven. lol, okay but don't worry I like the story. I kind of had the same dream too, but mine was more like hunger games but darker version. I want to make a fanfic for it but I just don't know how. lol. Okay, I'm mumbling already. Thank you for sharing the story. Keep it up~!
amanda13 #9
Chapter 5: i love the tension ! ^^ really nice. it's creepy and it seriously gives that mysterious vibe. a little disappointed on the last chapter but still amazing. but i already expected that she's a ghost , it's an obvious clue ^^
great story though
sieves-aim
#10
Chapter 5: i thought it was something like a cult. . in which she will be next sacrifice. . but I guess, I'm wrong. . I never thought she was a ghost. .