Chapter 1: i mean like can't you 'write a thousand nore sentence'. i hatee you why u write such a beautiful storyyyyy and a gust of wind i rather you gimme the happy ending already :( ciao.

Chapter 1: Awesome awesome!! is all I Can say!! <3

Chapter 1: OOIIH! i loved this so much!! great job! <3

Chapter 1: Whenever you add side stories to this (like "Eye of the Storm" and "A Gust of Wind to Hold My Hand") can you link them here please? ^.^

Chapter 1: I seriously wouldn't have minded a thousand more sentences XD
/hint hint

This is suuuch an awesome fic. Those extra thousand sentences would be very much appreciated *o* I mean, you did every couple justice...
SuLay is this calm and collected couple, with le leader Suho and the calm and caring Lay who would always help his looove :)
Then there's XiuChen and they're so freaking cute like seriously Xiumin is such a possesive baozi and Chen is so adorable uuurgh I have this urge to hug and squish him but then Xiumin would kill me so yeah o_o
And then we have BaekYeol ,and oh, let's not even go there *my innocent miiiind* :(
KaiSoo, soooo alksdjlkjflkjgldsfh cannot put feelings into words Dx
HunHan is sooo damn adorable, just how I imagine them to be :3
AND THEN THERE'S TAORIS. OHMYGOD. HE WAITED 13 YEARS KRISUS I UNDERSTAND YOU WANTED TO PROTECT EVERYONE BUT AT THE SAME TIME....
well, this is a long comment o_o
but seriously. this was too awesome :)

A thousand more words about kris and Tao are very much welcomed (^*ㅇㅅㅇ*^)

L.O.V.E IT!!!!<3

I. CAN. NOT. PUT. MY. FEELS. IN. TO. WORDS.