Aish! That Jung Daehyun! (Reviewed by Gillian)
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Title: "Aish! That Jung Daehyun!"
Author: kpoplistener
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Title ☆ (2.5/5)
Interesting title, definitely something I haven't seen around on AFF however I have pet peeves about story titles including Korean slang. From a title like that, I can already predict that the main character and Daehyun will have this bickering, love-hate relationship at the start but then fall in love and end up together at the conclusion of the story. With a title like that, it's really easy to predict what will happen.
Foreword & Description ☆ (6/10)
Overall, the foreword and description is okay. The foreword was kinda messy. It’s simple and to the point but on the other hand, it’s pretty mediocre, especially the description. The first sentenced hooked me but then you lost me after that. Too many fanfics here in AFF have similar descriptions. If you’re going to write/use an idea that’s been used too many times before, please make it your own and make it stand out from the rest of the fanfics here on AFF. Try make it different from the others because there are way too many fanfics about an original character living with a kpop group. I know it’s a great story plot theme but really if you want to write a good story/fanfic, make it original as possible. Also, it was kinda weird seeing a character chart for the major character and then a profile description for a minor character. It would have been ideal if you just included the minor character into the character chart but I understand some designers have limitations about the number of characters in a chart.
Appearance (Posters/Backgrounds/Banners) ☆ (10/10)
I'd like to say that all the posters/chapter posters, background and the character
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