MIRACLE : Even If Time Passed

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Rain keeps drop as if it can feels his pain too…And he’s there, standing in a hard rain, still hoping that this is just a bad dream, but unfortunately, he knows it, that this nightmare is as real as the rain drops…

“Donghae…what are you talking about? Are you going to leave me?”, tears falled down from Hyukjae’s eyes as he is holding on Donghae’s hand tight, asking for some explanation. “But you promised to me, that you’ll always beside me, no matter what could be happen, that you’ll be my spirit when I’m down, that you’ll be my light when dark comes, that you’ll be my blanket when I’m cold, that you’ll be –“,

“HYUKJAE!!”, Donghae screamed, suddenly cut off Hyukjae’s unfinished words.

He pulled his hands from Hyukjae’s grasp, and beginning to talks at the first time that night. “Please stop all of that non-sense statements Hyukkie..I’m tired with all of this. You know we’re both have to move on, and there is no way this could be succeed anymore…”, he stopped a moment, looked at Hyukjae’s expression which seems still confused with his statement just now. He’s trying to take a deep breath and then starting to say that simple words, but explained everything for both him and Hyukjae, “I mean OUR relationship.”

After said those words, Donghae walked away from Hyukjae without even turned around to him, and left Hyukjae in the rain, weep for his self….ALONE….

That’s it.

Hyukjae knows that he couldn’t save his relationship with Donghae anymore. A relationship which they had for years, but now ended up so easily. That’s what makes him more sad than before. ‘How could Donghae do this to me? What’s my fault to him? He promised that he’ll never ever leave me…but how could he? Just because he’d been told that he’ll become more shine if he choose this way…but how could he sacrifice our relationship that easy???’, he keeps asking those questions without received any answer.

Hyukjae just standing there, watching Donghae’s back slowly disappeared. He then suddenly kneels down, cannot handle his own body any longer, he feels his body have no strength anymore, he looked to the ground, and tears drop more harder than before mixed with the rain. ‘Dong…hae…I will always remember this day…this dusky valentine’s day u gave to me…..’, and suddenly everything becomes dark.

Foreword

This is my first fan fic, hope you guys will like it....^^

I'm so excited about this, and your comments is what i need to improve my skill on writing this story,so hopefuly u'll give criticism and suggestion about this fic....@.@

If there are any parts of this story u don't like please let me know, i'll try to fix it then... ;D

Oh, and one think i almost forget, i'm not to good in english, so...Mianhae if there are some misspelling too...kkkkkk:p

But, i hope u guys still can read it and enjoy it...FIGHTING!!^^

Comments

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whitelf
#1
It's sweet and sad... Really love EunHae couple.. I'll wait the sequel then ^o^
Nemolovely #2
I really love ur story^^ I hope u will write other story about eunhae cuz my bias is Donghae and I also love this couple.<br />
Fighting....!!
d_uwikz
#3
@Ainzz88 woah,you've finished read it alll the chapters?! <br />
that pretty fast *.*<br />
thanks for the spirit,i'll try to make the sequel better :D<br />
and thanks for commenting too XD
Ainzz88
#4
Finally i finish read this fic..<br />
i cry again...<br />
i just LOVE EunHae<3333333<br />
but i most DEEPLY IN LOVE with HAE XP..<br />
i almost hate hae for the first chapter..<br />
thank god you dont make me hate him more^^..<br />
FIGHTING!!! <3
d_uwikz
#5
@sujulove429 maybe,i'm considering to make the prequel or maybe the sequel,just still waiting responses from you guys..^^
golferox
#6
awww...this was cute!! a happy ending for eunhae!! is there any other kind??
d_uwikz
#7
@Esther_artemisia okay,i'll save your idea,but sorry,i think not in this one,i'm already had idea for the final...kekeke :p<br />
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maybe i'll update tomorrow! ^^
Esther_artemisia #8
aaaaaa, short chappie<br />
make it longer<br />
oh, do you remember a scene in sorry-sorry, between donghae and hyukjae?<br />
put it on<br />
to make it more dramatic<br />
update soon, ok?<br />
love you, girls
d_uwikz
#9
haha....relax guys...you guys seem to be very excited and happy about what will happen next! ^^<br />
but do you think i'll make the ending easier?<br />
umm....i don't think so! :p<br />
i'll put some last 'spicy' things for the ending....kekeke<br />
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THANKS FOR YOUR COMMENTS GUYS! ALWAYS! ;D<br />
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see ya in the next chapter! ^^
allrisestrawberry
#10
Lee Hyukjae! Why do you have to kiss Hyohyeon? But you're thinking of Hae that time? Ok. Hahahaha. <br />
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And Lee HYUKJAE, please be fast!! Hae's gonna wait for you. ^^